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The week’s prompt from Haiku Heights is Sugar
Sugar
Your freezing silence
Makes my thoughts go sour with gall
Come, sugar my heart
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I see double meaning on the last line. Love it!
Why can’t I come up with something sweet like this… I’ll try again next time
Oh, Hazel, yours is great.
It’s always a joy to come to your blog.
A great last line.
Thank you, Anthony
Oh! This went right to my heart! Thank you for sharing!
You are very welcome, Wabi. And many thanks for your lovely comment
Sweet coaxing. Very, very nice.
Thank you, Kim
Beautiful !!!
Many thanks, Green Speck
A very nice balance of words. Now *that* is love!
Thank you for your kind words
“Sugar my heart”. I like your romantic take on this.
Thanks, Alice
Sounds like a sulky man!
No, he isn’t
Beautiful lines just gladdened the heart!!
Thank you, Reshma
I see eyes batting at the end there
LOL
You know it, Rosy
Sweet
Thanks, Sis.
Very sweet
Many thanks, WC
good one….
Thank you, Debu
Your descriptive images are always right on, and I can see them line up, visually and verbally.
I have done limericks before but not tried the haiku.
Thank you so much Joyce, for the kind words. Do try the Haiku. I know you would love doing them
OK. I will. What is the haiku prompt site listed as, or where?
Here you are with the address of the site. http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/
Thank you. I will check it out. I just followed another poetry prompt blog too that is new. I listed it on my site. It started last week.
You are welcome. Maybe I will try out this new poetry prompt.
Very true how thoughts and silence can freeze up like that. And when that happens, all that’s needed is a little sugar.
Very wonderful analysis, Sheila.
Thanks a million
I like the “sugar my heart” line.
Thank you, Claudia.
I have nominated you for an award- check out my blog!!!
Many thanks, Lucy. I’m grateful
Beautiful. I’ve fallen off on this now as I catch up on my wordpress blog. Will do some weekend catch ups.
Thanks a million.
I’m also far behind due to poor connectivity What else is new?
Nicely done.
Tim
Thank you, Tim
short and really really nice.
Glad you like it, Audrina
I hope all is well, please email me your email address when you have a chance.
Thanks.
I’m doing well, Mary. Thanks for your concern. I was having internet problems. Will send you my email address as requested
Reblogged this on LAND OF FUN and commented:
SWEETEST – LOVELIEST !
Thank you so much, Aman
wonderful and so deeply felt
Thank you, Soumyav. Glad to see you here
My pleasure
point explained precisely.
Thanks a million, Trisha. Hope you are doing well