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Sleep No More
It is late in the night,
So late
The dead silence
Soothes my eyelids
Luring me
To shut them
And succumb
To the sweetness
Of sleep.
And why not?
My dear one
Already yields
To the lull
Of the night
His gentle snores
Mingle
With the child-like
Imitation
Of our boys,
The two sounds
Blending
A discordant
Music
Creating
The only whispers
Of the night.
Behind my computer
I give birth
And ignore
The cold place
By his side
Rightfully mine
I ignore
The look
Before he drifts off,
Hot or cold
Or both
I choose not
To see
Nor know
And I resist
Sleep,
For my muse
Has murdered
My sleep.
I am no
Lady Macbeth
But I shall
Sleep no more
Till I have
Scribbled
And released
My muse
(C) Celestine Nudanu
15/07/12
Nice one! The muse has no concept of time.
That is true, Rosy. Many thanks.
Oh gosh, do I ever know this. I have no one to give me the look for staying up, but I have been so chained by my muse. Great great poem. Loved it
Thank you CC. I’m glad you love this. I just had to write you know. the urge was great.
beautiful! the snoring made me laugh and reminded me of being wide awake with a baby, toddler and husband all snoring in harmony beside me! 🙂
yeah, I know. but sometimes the snores are not harmonious at all. lol! glad you stopped by.
Powerful…if there was a love button…this one gets it…i especially love the 3rd part…just powerful, packs a punch…”for my muse has murdered my sleep” just pow wow powerful my friend. WELL DONE!!!
Thank you, Boomie. My head is bursting at your words.
It is so cute,brilliantly written.Super awesome thoughts with a fluency of charming words.So sweet,really lovable .
Thank you my friend for your lovely words.
Reblogged this on onlinefunland and commented:
Sleep No More !
Great Poem
Many thanks. You make my head swell all the time.
I love hearing when you listen to your heart song.
So do I. I hope everything is fine at your end. Many thanks..
This is lovely. I love love love the last paragraph. 🙂
Glad you love this, Sassy. Thanks a million for your visits. Much appreciated!
Yes! you must allow your muse to overflow! Strong and beautiful writing. Yet, another WOW! :)!!!
Many thanks, my dear. I do appreciate your coming by.
I have been to this place often, gotten that look hot or cold, heard tandem snoring. Beautifully done, and resonated with me. Glad I found you through Boomie!
Thank you Susan. I am also glad to have you here; I do hope you will stay for good. Will be visiting shortly. Many thanks
You are most welcome…and yes, you have gained a new fan 🙂
oops snoring, not shoring. I need coffee.
Ha ha ha! Never noticed it till you mentioned it. 🙂
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