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Hello my friends, I have been missing in action for the past three (3) days and I missed you guys. I was not able to post my Haiku based on Birth and Hummingbird due to power cut in the part of Accra, where I live. The lights came on only yesterday around 7.00 pm and by then I was too tired and bored to do anything meaningful. So I am combining the prompt for Day Twenty-Four (24) of September Haiku Heights Challenge, Paradox with the others. Please, humour me.
(1) Paradox
The streams hiss and kiss
Back and forth, over the rocks
Paradox of love
(2) Hummingbird
As the winds fly south
So does the sleek hummingbird
On a freedom quest
(3) Birth
Screams of joyous pain
Ease me into a sweet world
I debut in style
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
(24/09/12)
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I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom. 🙂
boomiebol said:
Great stuff! I especially loved Birth.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, as always.
RoSy said:
Glad you have your electricity back.
Niiice – especially love the Birth one.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Rosy. It was hell during the black out.
ash said:
Lovely haiku. I liked the hummingbird 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Ash. Glad you like it. 🙂
Patti said:
Good ones. i love the line, “I debut in style.” (And you and I chose the same picture of the hummingbird. I like what you did with it.)
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, as always, for your sweet comments. Very much appreciated. 🙂
Grace said:
I like the paradox of the streams ~ Nice one ~
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Grace.
Susan L Daniels said:
Again, C, these are wonderful, and well worth the wait.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you , Susan. Glad you appreciate them. 🙂
odyzz said:
all three are well crafted ..I really liked the Birth one..
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Odyzz. Glad you liked that one.
Bruce Ruston said:
nice writes all of them
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Bruce
Karin Wiberg said:
I especially liked Birth!
readinpleasure said:
Glad you like it, Karin.
Green Speck said:
A wonderful trio 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Green Speck. 🙂
Teresa said:
Your paradox haiku is great!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Teresa
Kathy Donlan said:
Wow, I was all set to declare my love for the first after reading it, but they are all fantastic. How do you do it?
readinpleasure said:
Ow Kathy! I don’t know. They just pop out. Thank you so much for the vote of confidence. 🙂
poetrydiary said:
Love your paradox one – captures the real wonder of nature.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Poetrydiary.
TheOthers1 said:
What a great collection.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, CC. 🙂
1girl4adamwest said:
These are all wonderful! I missed you and happy you are back on line! YAY!!!
readinpleasure said:
I am happy to be back, my friend. Glad for your lovely support, always.
magicalmysticalteacher said:
Hissing, kissing streams: paradoxical indeed!
Paradox
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, MMT
Hazel Anastasia said:
hiss and kiss – you nailed the paradox!
readinpleasure said:
Glad to hear that, Hazel
The Silver Poet said:
hiss and kiss….very like love games I’ve played throughout my life…
readinpleasure said:
Ha, I continue to play those games too, Ana. 🙂
globaldruginfo said:
Really amazing!!! especially Humming bird and birth 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, my friend. 🙂
globaldruginfo said:
🙂
pennycoho said:
All three just wonderful, thank you Celestine. 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, too, Penny for your lovely support, always. 🙂
pennycoho said:
Always a pleasure Celestine, and fyi, we are starting some preliminary planning things here for a spring visit to some of our blogging friends around the world. Will keep you informed of course. Meeting in person would be so very wonderful. Penny, 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Can’t wait to see you guys, Penny. 🙂
pennycoho said:
Me also Celestine. 🙂
Sharmishtha Basu said:
beautiful trio celestine!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, my friend.
lenwilliamscarver said:
You are a very special writer Celestine and I am proud to say I am a friend of one so talented and pure of heart. thank you for sharing your beauty within with the rest of us.:) God bless and Keep you.
readinpleasure said:
Oh Len, thank you so much for your wonderful words. I enjoy your writings too, especially the Christian ones. You are a woman after God’s own heart. Blessings to you and your family. 🙂
eof737 said:
Those power cuts are so familiar a memory. Great poetry. 🙂
eof737 said:
Glad I’m caught up on all your posts… Time does fly and I didn’t know it had been so long… Phew! 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Frankly, I always await your visits with some joyous expectations. 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Ah, you know about the power cuts. Thank you, Elizabeth for your wonderful support, always.
sherinsk said:
Sorry for being unresponsive.Your haikus are of great depths.keep writing 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Sherinsk. 🙂 You don’t have to apologise. I understand. 🙂