The week’s prompt from Haiku Heights is Shimmer
Shimmer
Glimmering rustling silk Shimmers amongst the lilies Dainty butterfly Glimmering pouting lips Shimmering red in the moonlight Pulsating with heat Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 23/2/13 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
reikiheidi said:
I don’t know how you do it, putting so much imagery in such few words 🙂 Wonderful as ever Celestine.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks a million, Heidi 🙂
yepiratevisiting said:
Ooooooooh..sensual haiku! Shimmering and sizzling!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Managua. Smiling at your words 🙂
Alice Keys said:
Very romantic. Luscious.
readinpleasure said:
Ow thanks, Alice
Anthony North said:
Beautifully done, both.
readinpleasure said:
You are too kind, Sir.
1girl4adamwest said:
Strong and moving words for our imaginations!
readinpleasure said:
Marie, thanks 🙂
Joanne Moceri-Taveira said:
clever linked the butterfly with silk…well-done
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Joanne. Glad to see you here. 🙂
Gemma Wiseman said:
Beautiful, descriptive images in these haiku!
readinpleasure said:
Thanks a million, Gemma 🙂
theothers1 said:
Ooh I liked this. Well done.
readinpleasure said:
Glad you like this, CC
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sensual and nice 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Bjorn 🙂
WabiSabi said:
LOVE your silk butterfly that shimmers!
readinpleasure said:
Glad you do, Wabi 🙂
Sharifah said:
That’s a really lovely way of describing butterflies!
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Sharifah 🙂
silentlyheardonce said:
Both are beautiful work.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks a million, Kim 🙂
LAND OF FUN said:
Beautifully written – Powerful imagination 😀
Happy Sunday !
readinpleasure said:
Aman, you made my Sunday. 🙂
boomiebol said:
This is beautiful
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, as always
Sparkly Angel said:
Two different shades of shimmer! Each haiku beautiful in its own way!
I enjoyed butterfly one more!
readinpleasure said:
I appreciate your fine comment 🙂
teeceecounsel said:
Lovely!
You are good with putting words together! 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Oh Teecee, thanks a million for the lovely compliment 🙂
katrinataylor44 said:
moonbeams shine brightly
rhythmic hips shake and shimmer
dancing existence
readinpleasure said:
Beautifully written 🙂 Sensuous dance indeed. 🙂
katrinataylor44 said:
🙂
Green Speck said:
I loved it !!!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, 🙂
Claire 'Word by Word' said:
Just what we need in February, shimmering poetry to carry us through to Spring, beautiful Celestine.
readinpleasure said:
Ow, Claire. I appreciate your support, always 🙂
Magical Mystical Teacher said:
Oh, those seductive lips!
Shimmering Shadows & Haiku
readinpleasure said:
So hot 🙂
Hazel Anastasia said:
Silk and lilies! I just love those things.
readinpleasure said:
I’m glad 🙂
unfetteredbs said:
great vision! natures beauty and nature’s passion
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so much, Audra
RoSy said:
Plain & simply put – You’re a natural!
readinpleasure said:
Oh Rosy. I’m humbled 🙂
CuriositytotheMax said:
oooooooooo, the first haiku so dainty and delicate and the second SIZZLES! Great interpretations on the prompt.
Reading Pleasure said:
Thank you so much, Max 🙂
Reshma said:
Love the contrasting delicate and dazzling shimmers 🙂
Reading Pleasure said:
Thank you, Reshma 🙂
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Sharmishtha Basu said:
simply gorgeous!
readinpleasure said:
Glad you think so. 🙂
Lucid Gypsy said:
I’m glad I got back before this disapeared down my reader – wonderful as always my dear!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Gilly 🙂
Adriana Dascalu said:
beautiful! the second one is my favorite!
readinpleasure said:
Many thanks, Adriana. 🙂 Glad to see you here. 🙂
themendingverse said:
So shimmering-ly vivid! Lush.
readinpleasure said:
Oh, thank you so much, Mendingverse. 🙂
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ElizOF said:
What a wonderful haiku… Hope all is well. I’ve been MIA of late. So much going on at home and not all pleasant.
Take care,
Eliz
readinpleasure said:
Warm thoughts and prayers coming your way, my friend. Do take care 🙂
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