On Carpe Diem Tan Renga is to complete the following haiku by Buson with your own two lines of 7-7 syllables each. My first attempt at Tan renga so do treat me ‘gently’ 🙂
Buson’s haiku
the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah
dispel the dancing shadows
as branches sway in the wind
Tan Renga
the rainy seasona paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah dispel the dancing shadows as branches sway in the wind Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 21/06/13
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Reading Pleasure 
I recently tried this form, and it is fun, isn’t it?
It is, Amrit. But rather challenging I might add 🙂
you have created a wonderful image
Cheers!
JzB
Thank you, JzB
Very nice!
Thank you
Great , thanks .
Thank you so much, Daoud 🙂
That’s great, goodness Celestine you are prolific!
Oh Gilly 🙂 I’m grateful 🙂
cool imagery with just a few words…♥
Thank you Sunshine
Lovely, Celestine. Good work. I shall have to try one soon as I get settled in France.
Please do. I would love to read your wonderful works with a French flavour 🙂
Soon. We’re at the airport watching them get our airship ready. 🙂 EXCITED!
Have a wonderful flight, my dear 🙂
Happy feet back on ground tonight! 🙂 Alice
Such great flow of words!
You are my inspiration, Marie 🙂 God bless you
Ah – Movin’ up on the haiku ladder I see… Niiice! 🙂
Thank you, 🙂
very challenging. I almost didn’t participate. I am glad you did. Yours came out beautifully.
Thank you so much 🙂 I almost did not do it too
What a nice first attempt Reading Pleasure, just wonderfull. You completed this Tan Renga in a nice way.
(By the way: at wordpress my name is Basho2012, but on my Carpe Diem weblog I am Kristjaan who writes under the penname Chèvrefeuille).
Thank you for the compliment, Kristjaan. Name correction duly noted 🙂
the shadows from swaying limbs can stir the imagination…
beautiful comment, 4joy 🙂
Gorgeous Celestine! I have my new prompt up its a free share so you can post anything at all =)
Thank you, Candice 🙂
Nice imagery & interesting form!:)
Many thanks, Tarang
Love the imagery of your completion.
Thank you, Bjorn
Sighing here Celestine, your finishing flow of words perfection – Tan Renga! 🙂
Ow, thanks my dear friend 🙂
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You are getting better and better with all these forms 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Ah, there you go, once again. Kudos…read that twice:)
Thank you, Panchali