Carpe Diem Special Prompt: Kikusha-Ni’s ‘The Dusk In Rain’
my body all alone
in this autumn I feel –
the dusk in rain by Kikusha-Ni
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Carpe Diem Special: The Dusk In Rain
28 Friday Jun 2013
Posted in Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
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Wow! Great inspiration on Kikusha-Ni’s haiku. Thank you for sharing with Carpe Diem. Every haiku you share is a wonder and I see that you’re becoming more and more one with haiku.
Thanks a million, Kristjaan. It’s an honour to be part of Carpe Diem 🙂
I can’t think of a worse plight than to be homeless in the rain, so your second vignette fills me with sadness.
Kikusha-Ni’s Dusk
Very well said.
Thank you 🙂
I see a lot of homeless ones everyday. it’s a situation that tears at me 🙂
So descriptive too!
Thank you my dear sister 🙂
That first haiku is awesome! I feel the heaviness of loneliness and beyond.
Thank you, Maggie Grace.
the first I loved for the line ‘at the dawn of dusk’, and the second highlights the growing problem of homelessness….well-done
The problem of homelessness is one that a remedy might be long in coming all over. Thank you, 4joy
a beauty in the pain – lovely
Thank you so much
The first is my favorite, because I can see that flower.
I love that one too. Many thanks 🙂
A homeless and subject to the vagaries of the weather is most sad.But there are many in such a situation. Nicely Celestine!
Hank
Indeed, there re many of them here, Kaykuala. Thanks for coming by
gloomy like autumn rain! sad and beautiful!
Thank you 🙂
The first one is so filled with loneliness.
Thanks, Bjorn