Carpe Diem Tan Renga is to complete the following haiku by the wonderful Bjorn Brudberg with your own two lines of 7-7 syllables each. I’m trying my hands again and I hope it works out. 🙂
Bjorn’s
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
time to hit the feather beds
lure of soft whispering winds
Tan Renga
after fireworksthe silence is clearer
darkness is deeper time to hit the feather beds lure of soft whispering winds Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 28/06/13
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Reading Pleasure 
Very nice! Love those featherbeds.
Thank you 🙂
You did a good job completing it. I’m ready for sleep.
Ha ha ha. By all means do go to bed and have sweet dreams 🙂
You done good!
Thanks, dear
How nice
Many thanks, Bjorn
I like the conclusion to a wonderful evening. Thank you for sharing 🙂
Deeper Darkness
The pleasure is mine, Jrb. Thanks for the support 🙂
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very nice!
Thanks 🙂
I like “lure of whispering winds”!
Deeper Darkness
Glad you do, Becca 🙂 Soft whispering winds can lure you to sleep. They do me all the time 🙂
Even though I’ve only been awake a few hours when I read this it’s so soothing I want to go back to bed! 🙂
That is the perfect effect. 🙂
Lovely completion of the Tan Renga started by Bjorn.
Thank you, Kristjaan
I enjoyed the way you made this poem twist with your new direction. I thought it was about fireworks… then the rocket really went off. 😉 Good one.
Thank you Alice. Being my second attempt, I was a bit apprehensive about the turn-out 🙂
It came out quite well. 🙂
I’m glad 🙂
Nice one! 🙂
Thank you 🙂
beautiful .. peaceful more so!
Thank you for the lovely words 🙂
beautiful poem!
Many thanks, Trisha
Your words are like honey, it drips with sweetness! Great poem dear friend!
🙂
I thank you so much, dearest Seyi 🙂
Nice one, Bjorn is superb isn’t he?
He is Gilly. A superb master. 🙂