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This week’s Ligo Haibun prompts are two photos, of a moon and well, some figurines I am sure :-). Another honourable mention, the third for last week’s Haibun that I wrote. I’m very grateful to all the three judges for deeming my work of some worth. Again, thanks to all my lovely friends out there who continue to support me in my journey of better writing.
Moon
I have always had a love affair with the moon. Don’t get me wrong, I’m no werewolf. Perhaps I had better re-phrase that. I love the full moon on a velvety dark night. The blueness of its light around the peripherals of darkness reminds me somewhat of the aureole around the smooth darkness of a pointed breast. And later when I first met my wife right under the moon’s radiance, those breasts, jutting out of the sheer flimsy garment she wore, assaulted my masculinity. She was my moon.
The first time we made love was under the knowing wink of the moon. We basked in its incandescence.
Now, Diane smiled sweetly at me, her luminous eyes huge in her ebony face. I gazed at the moon peeking through the solemn darkness as it started to blossom into fullness. There were no stars up there but that was fine with me. I had one in my arms, cooing softly.
ebony night moon winks at my baby I count my blessings“
This is a masterpiece Celestine, I simply love your array of words! Great job!!! Fingers crossed, I hope this comment would post!!!!
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Thank you my dear sister. You can uncross your fingers. comment posted successfully 🙂
Thank God! I’m free to chat with my friends again! Yay!!!
Welcome back 🙂
Oh my goodness. That was really good. I thought it was a man writing it, you really got the perspective. Wow! When is your book coming out again?
Ow, Nana you make me swollen-headed. I promise you soon, my friend 🙂
Lovely haibun!
Thank you Gabriella
your work is of HIGH worth to me
Thanks a million, Anna
This is beautiful writing. I love the way the moon interacts with this couple -and the end…no stars in the sky but a lovely one cooing softly! Fantastic! 😊
Many thanks, Sunshine, for the lovely compliment
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Subtle and sexy!
Thanks, Gilly
I love full moon nights too!
Thanks, Trisha
Beautiful Celestine. Enjoyed the comedy of not being a werewolf, but more so the love and sensuality of your narrator’s words.
Thank you, Sarah Ann. Most grateful for the nice comments
Woo Hoo! I LOVE this. You have outdone yourself this time. Sexy. Romantic. Lovely. YUM!
Ow, Alice, merci beaucoup, mon amie 🙂
Je vous en prie! 🙂
Beautiful!
Thank you, Rosy
Hi Celestine, we have to stop meeting like this (lol), always a pleasure to be here and read your beautiful and creative works of art, and that sums up my feelings on your haibun this week as well! 🙂
Most grateful, Penny. But how and where else can we meet if not here ? 🙂
An excellent point Celestine! God bless the connections that have allowed me to meet you and us communicate with one another across these many geographic miles we are apart. Because when we connect online (or when you and your family are in my thoughts) there is no distance at all between us, dearest friend! Thank you! 🙂
Amen to your lovely words 🙂
This is so beautiful, sensual and romantic I love it Celestine =)
Thank you, Candice
Definitely worthy of an honorable mention this week, Celestine. In fact I think that every week since I’ve joined the challenge. Lovely work.
Thank you so much Steph 🙂
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Hi Celestine, This was sensual and beautiful. well done
Many thanks 🙂
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Wow! So beautifully written. I love this piece! 🙂
Thank you, Teecee 🙂
Welcome! 🙂
I’m loving the words you weave together, you take me away to another place!!
Ow, thank you so much, Marie 🙂
oh my! your writing is truly special– original, very sensual 🙂
Glad for the nice compliment 🙂
“A very private moment offered to the public as a psalm in the night,”
she poetically comments…
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Beautiful comment, Jules. I thank you 🙂