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Haiku Heights prompt. Squeeze
Squeeze
Poor ventilation
I squeeze to make room for you
Sweet breeze in my heart
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 16/07/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
16 Tuesday Jul 2013
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Haiku Heights prompt. Squeeze
Squeeze
Poor ventilation
I squeeze to make room for you
Sweet breeze in my heart
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 16/07/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Spread that breeze around – but not too far!
Laughing. I will 🙂
Awesome as always and just pretty!
Thank you, Eva.
Lovely pressure 🙂
Thanks, Eric.
Only if he’s cute – LOL
He is 🙂
🙂
Aww! I love that last line. 🙂
Thank you, Blossom
Isn’t it such a beautiful gesture…sends a very warm message..God bless..I liked it very much..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/juicy-fingers-shine-haiku.html
RS:)
Oh thanks so much,Ramesh.
aaaaaww!! LOVELY!! Brilliant haiku! Keep writing! 🙂
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My take for squeeze.
Thank you, Jayanth. Glad to see you here
aah, the last line is remarkable. Love it, Celestine.
Thanks, Panchali
Just making yourself a bit more cozy I read!! 😉 Have a great day!!
You too, Nanka 🙂
This is one of my favorites! Beautifully lovely!
Thank you so much, Marie
Awww Celestine!! Love the sweet breeze and the coziness that come with it 🙂
Thank you so much, as always 🙂
Sweet breeze n my heart…Nice!
Thank you, Rallentanda
A hint of romance here 🙂
Yes, 🙂 Thanks, Amrit
So romantic!! 🙂
Thank you, wabi
Beautiful Celestine, I don’t know how I missed many of your posts! But they are always in the class of their own, always!
🙂
Thank you, Sandra. Your words are a delight. 🙂
Celestine, wonderful haiku! Searching for peace during stress. 🙂
Thank you, Claudia.