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Our wonderful host on Caper Diem Chèvrefeuille has written a haiku red tear-stained eyes below which we are to complete into a Tan renga.
Chèvrefeuille’s
decomposed flowers silent witness of a relative red tear-stained eyes drift past the misty garden
The sad lily, his last gift
Tan Renga
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
22/07/13
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Reading Pleasure 
Then face to face
with Love’s own grace
My fears no more parading
I left them there
with all my care
among the Lilies fading. Last verse of ‘the song of the soul’ by St John of the Cross
Ow, beautifully poignant, Tigerbrite. I love this 🙂
heartbreaking and beautiful, really nice, fitting lines
Thanks a million, Jessica.
Candidly poignant.
Thank you Marie 🙂
Perfect fit of your lines to these. Lovely work. Again. 🙂 Your words always make me sigh.
Ow, thank you so much, Alice 🙂
Very sad!
Thanks, Gilly
So sad.
Yes, Nana. These words reminded me so much of my father.
“The sad lily, his last gift” … what a wonderfully composed completion of th Tan Renga Celestine. That last line is so sad and painful, so full of strong emotions. Well done … I shed a few tears as I read this completion of the Tan Renga. Thank you for touching me that deep.
Kristjaan, the pleasure is mine for giving me the opportunity to be so expressive.
Sad and lovely.
Thank you, Maggie
what a pair!!!!
Yay 🙂
Raw emotions… lovely!
Thank you
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so well written it breaks the heart.
ow, thanks a million Sunshine
A poignant piece … beautiful.
Thank you, Amrit 🙂
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Excellent! Could read your words all day Celestine! 🙂
I’m so glad you appreciate my work, Penny.