At Carpe Diem today the prompt is to write a haiku inspired by Kikaku’s.
above the sea
a rainbow, erased by
a flock of swallows
Mine
across the gay skies sudden expanse of dark sheath migrating swallows Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 22/08/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
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Thank you, Alastair 🙂
Lovely
Thanks so much, Kiru. I appreciate your visit.
A perfect scenery.
Thanks, Amrit 🙂
Love it!
I’m glad
Very pretty…dazzling! Love this, Celestine.
So glad you do, Panchali. Have a lovely weekend my friend.
Nice, Celestine! I like it very much.
I’m pleased to hear that, George. I do hope you’re fine.
Very nice take on Kikaku’s haiku … very well done.
Thank you Kristjaan
I love these…I all ways get such a treat with your words…they always soothe me. You have such a precious gift sweet friend and I am happy you share it so generously! 🙂
Thank you so much, Christina. Your generosity never ceases to amaze me. It’s a lovely honour to know you 🙂
Ditto sweet friend!! Only I feel the honor all mine! It is so very easy to be generous with praise for your writing…you do always inspire me so much with your beautiful soul that shines so bright through your exquisite words! 😀 Hugs & Blessings!! ~
A nice image of the miracles that are swallows!
Yes indeed 🙂
It’s good.
Thank you Nana
a beautiful sight, your words…i hope to see the migration one day. 🙂
Sunshine, thank you so much. It’s a fine sight
the nearest thing to a flock of swallow are the Canadian geese that honk as a group as they fly by. cute.
How lovely! Very vivid imagery.
Thank you so much, Eva.
You’re welcome!
Brava! Well done!
Marie, I’m most grateful 🙂
I can see thos black clouds.. really good.
Thank you, Bjorn