Last day of September Heights. The Prompt is Crooked
Crooked
heaven bound
on crooked ladder
angels weep
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 30/09/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
September Heights Day 30: Crooked
30 Monday Sep 2013
Posted in Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
Reading Pleasure 
Love this…..avoid those crooked ladders at all costs. 🙂 Have a great week, Sweet Friend!!
You too, Skye 🙂
I really like this, Celestine. Brilliant and sad at the same time.
Thank you, as always.
Brilliant….one needs the guidance of virtue and values to avoid those ladders! Very nicely done, Celestine. Love this!
Your beautiful support of my work overwhelms me, my dear friend. I’m most grateful! 🙂
That’s a very special message there….thanks..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/09/a-month-goes-by-haiku.html
RS
Thank you Ramesh
may the repentant angels grow wings again………i like to read it like this…….this is a many faceted gem Celestine……
You are right, Sumana. This is on more than one level. 🙂
Nice! You write beautifully! You really make me think!
Thanks for the kind words, Jayanth.
Very thought provoking Celestine.
Thanks so much, Gilly.
That is a beautiful image… Lovely haiku.
In case you are interested, the haiku writing month starts today at A Haiku A Day. I would be delighted if you could participate.
Thank you so much for the compliment and the invitation, HA. 🙂
Thank you for you visits during September Celestine. Don’t fall off the ladder:)
I won’t dear. 🙂 It was a nice reading journey on your blog, Rallentanda.
Absolutely beautiful. Love this. 🙂
Thank you so much, Cubby.
I liked this perspective a lot!
Nice 🙂
Many thanks, Satya.
Love the idea of Jacob’s Ladder being infected with a dose of the wobblies. Lovely haiku.
Thanks so much, Gemma. I took some license here!
Beautiful haiku. One must try to avoid this crooked ladder as much as he can. 🙂
Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and encouraging my haiku. Thanks. 🙂
You are very welcome. I appreciate your visit too. 🙂
I think a crooked ladder is about all we have to make the ascent!
Crooked Ways
He he he, you are right! If we don’t fall of first!
Nice metaphor crooked ladder to heaven. I’m sure it is since we all sin here and there causing mi-steps.
LOL! Thanks dear. We may fall off first!
Wow. I like the heart feeling I get from this poem.
Thank you Alice
🙂
This does give something to think about … brilliant haiku 🙂
Thank you so much, Amrit.
Oh – but – they will still make it right? Well – as long as they keep trying to behave…
I know – I’m trying 🙂
Aren’t we all? 🙂
Oh – I hope so.
Some of us need a little push though 😉
🙂
made me think
rightly done
beauty
Thank you, Hafiz.
You write brilliant haiku! beautifully .have nice day with love maxima
Thanks a million, Stefan. You have a nice day too!
Clever!
Thanks dear 🙂