Done for Recuerda Mi Corazon and Carpe Diem
Shell
billowing waves
crashing against
empty shells
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 11/10/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
11 Friday Oct 2013
Posted Carpe Diem, Challenges, Haiku, Haiku My Heart, Poetry
inDone for Recuerda Mi Corazon and Carpe Diem
Shell
billowing waves
crashing against
empty shells
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 11/10/13I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
howanxious said:
Wonderful… so well captured.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so!
gemma said:
Your words paint a beautiful picture.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Gemma
Kev said:
Lovely!
readinpleasure said:
Thanks , Kev. 🙂
teeceecounsel said:
I can imagine! A few words can really paint a picture. Good job as always. Welldone! 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so Teecee. Have a lovely weekend!
Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart said:
This is one of my favorites of yours. Hope you have a wonderful weekend!! Big hugs!!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Skye 🙂 You have a lovely weekend my friend!
Al said:
You can almost see the waves. Excellent
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Al.
Lea said:
Just like picking up a shell and hearing the ocean in its emptiness… your words and haiku bring it all home for me…
readinpleasure said:
Glad to hear that, Lea. 🙂
Cubby said:
Excellent haiku! Love it. 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Your words make me happy, Sonya. 🙂
Chèvrefeuille said:
Haiku as it is meant to be … a moment as short as the sound of a pebble thrown in water … caught in a few words. Chapeau!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Kristjaan for suhc lovely words 🙂
Dawn @ AlterEgomexicana said:
How this one made me ponder…!
readinpleasure said:
Yes, it is deep! Thanks Dawn.
Maggie Grace said:
Hard hitting emotional few words! Very nice.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Maggie.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I can actually hear the waves from your words.
readinpleasure said:
I’m glad!
artmusedog said:
beautiful shell haiku ~ can hear the ‘billowing waves’ ~ carol ^_^
readinpleasure said:
I’m glad, Carol. Thanks! 🙂
silent kim said:
Very visual.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Kim!
Lucid Gypsy said:
Shells are very inspiring I like what you’ve come up with!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so Gilly
1girl4adamwest said:
So much bang, in these words. Well done.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Marie.
Rebecca Brooks said:
simple and utterly profound.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Rebecca 🙂
Sharmishtha Basu said:
it created a pretty picture in mind, overpowering the sense of sadness
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Trisha. You are right!
Ramesh Sood said:
I could see it….what a beautiful haiku…!!!
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/10/a-thin-line-divide-haiku.html
RS
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Ramesh
judie said:
You words take me right there and I can feel the water on my feet and see the shells twisting and turning in the power of the waves.
readinpleasure said:
Ow, what a beautiful thing to say! Thank you Judie.
Sun said:
guess the waves drove out the creatures living in those shells – too much noise. ha-ha. 😆 love your offering ♥
readinpleasure said:
Yes, Sun, too much noise 🙂
Hazel said:
Reminds me of my shell collection when I was a kid. Thanks for bringing me back to that lovely memory, Celestine.
readinpleasure said:
You are very welcome Hazel. Appreciate your visits 🙂
Nana Prah said:
I like that you made the shells empty. Wasn’t expecting it.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Nana. That rather makes the haiku profound!.
gotham girl said:
I savored this one! Beautiful!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so!
Amrit Sinha said:
A beautiful scenery 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Amrit.
Mr. ClintonSpel said:
this one is strong! yes! short and strong 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Clinton 🙂
purplepeninportland said:
This is lovely and thought-provoking.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so 🙂
Jem Farmer - Boi Poet said:
Ah so!
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Jeremy. Your words make me smile. 🙂
Jem Farmer - Boi Poet said:
Glad to make you smile, you deserve it
Laura Hegfield said:
I can hear the waves in the emptiness… beautiful haiku!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so much, Laura.
thejerseygal®™ said:
Sounds like the New Jersey shore. Very nice!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Eva.
Eric Alagan said:
Billowing waves – nicely captured
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Eric. 🙂
mockingbird181984 said:
A truth about life… This speaks volumes! Well done!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you so much for your support 🙂