Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by the Becca Givens with your own two lines of 7-7 syllables each. Yesterday, I witnessed a partial eclipse of the sun and today being my birthday I’m combining both events to complete the Tan Renga. Hope I make some sense 🙂
Becca Givens’river stones caressed by flowing water pale moon shines
Mineobliterating the sun to cast a glow on my day
Tan Rengariver stones caressed by flowing water pale moon shines obliterating the sun casting a glow on my day Copyright © Celestine Nudanu (04/11/13)
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.