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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by the Becca Givens with your own two lines of 7-7 syllables each. Yesterday, I witnessed a partial eclipse of the sun and today being my birthday I’m combining both events to complete the Tan Renga. Hope I make some sense 🙂

Becca Givens’

river stones
caressed by flowing water
pale moon shines
 

Mine

obliterating the sun
to cast a glow on my day
 

Tan Renga

river stones
caressed by flowing water
pale moon shines
obliterating the sun
casting a glow on my day
 
 
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 
(04/11/13)

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.

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