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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by JRB of JRB’s Haiku five-seven-five. with our own two lines of 7-7 syllables each.

JRB’s

by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells

Mine

mirror empty promises
swept away by tidal waves

Tan Renga

by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
mirror empty promises
swept away by tidal waves
 
 
 
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 
(08/11/13)

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.

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