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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by Lolly of a Lovely Thing, with our own two lines of 7-7 syllables each.

Lolly’s

crossing the footbridge
a sound that comes unbidden …
my wild beating heart

Mine

the shadows of fading blooms
autumn bidding a farewell
 

Tan Renga

crossing the footbridge
a sound that comes unbidden …
my wild beating heart
shadows of a fading bloom
autumn bidding its farewell
 
 
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 
(15/11/13)

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.

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