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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to write a tanka inspired by the following tanka by Ishikawa Takuboku. I did try, guys! 🙂
 
 
Ishikawa Takuboku’s
 
On the white sand
Of the beach of a small isle
In the eastern Sea
I, my face streaked with tears
Am playing with a crab
Mine
 
 under the tree’s shade
gossamer lines of blurred weaves
mirror of life’s stretch
I, humbled by the patterns
gaze at the slow fading hues
 
 
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
19/11/13

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom

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