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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by Opie Houston with our own two lines of 7-7 syllables each.

Opie’s

oh, sweet october…
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine

 

Mine

sipping the last drops in bliss
warm against the winter’s freeze
 

Tan Renga

oh, sweet october…
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine
sipping the last drops in bliss
warm against the winter’s freeze
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 
(26/11/13)

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.

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