Carpe Diem Prompt: Under The Willow
For this episode of Carpe Diem Haiku’s “only the first line” the haiku has to follow the syllables-count 5-7-5, the classic rule. The first line must be:“under the willow.”
under the willow
hiding from glare of the sun
lovers’ stolen kiss
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The stolen ones are delicious… 🙂
You know it Ese 🙂
Ah…she’s back at last…a very touching haiku..
Thank you my dearest friend 🙂
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Thank you Tazein 🙂
Oh, that is lovely. Love the sweet, stolen kiss. Especially under a willow tree. 🙂
🙂 Thanks!
A little gem Celestine.
Many thanks Kristjaan. Glad you appreciate this 🙂
Every haiku I read is worth appreciation Celestine
lovers’ stolen kiss
arrested for grand heart theft
prisoners of love
Nice one Alice 🙂
prisoners of love
held up in their blind passions
no outlet in sight
no outlet in sight
not looking for one at all
eyes on each other
Very nice. And fun. 🙂
eyes on each other
not a look spared on someone
well, maybe a ‘roach 🙂 (silly, isn’t it?)
well, maybe a roach
over in the dark corner
shadow moves and stops
VERY silly. I love it. 😉
shadow moves and stops
over two naked bodies
moon playing games
I prefer haiku to stick to the convention and I love this one 🙂 great imagery!
Thanks Gilly 🙂
Stealing anything can be a delight! (Whoops! Did I just say that?)
Under the Willow
You just did and in this case I totally agree with you. 🙂
Stolen kisses always romantic.
You know it 🙂
Those stolen kisses are the sweetest.
Oh Bjorn how right you are 🙂
lovely.
Thanks Trisha!
A crime with benefits? 🙂 Lovely! Now where do I go looking for an accomplice?
You made me laugh, Jolly 🙂
This is hot…like the sun!!!
Yay! Thanks! 🙂
Love this!
I’m glad 🙂
Reblogged this on Speak Ghana.
Thanks 🙂