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Done for Recuerda Mi Corazon and also for Carpe Diem Haiku Shuukan prompt, Exile.
lone figure
in a dreamboat
to exile
2
I’m in hiding
from the sweet agony
of loving you
3
in hiding from him
I watch the lone flower bloom
a mirror of me
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.
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dreamboat to exile….
exquisite imagines, all three so expressive of your haiku prompt.
Thank you Rebecca. 🙂
lovely and deep romantic haiku with ‘exile’ theme ~ rather universal at times ~ xoxo
Thanks Carol 🙂
I especially like the second one!
Thanks Gilly.
… in hiding from the sweet agony of loving you… That is my favourite as well. Beautiful!
Thanks so much, CC 🙂
Third one touched me…. I liked it..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/she-hides-her-wingshaiku.html
RS:)
Glad to hear that Ramesh!
Now I’m asking why she’s hiding. I’d also like to know what’s up with all of these new blog face-lifts.
Nana, love as you know is not all roses. Agonizing love can make one hide from oneself or from the other partner.
Ah, the facelifts! Just experimenting, sis! 🙂
A single flower — a lovely but lonely image. wonderful set on exile!
Thanks Wabi!
I like your new look and colors!
Thanks Wabi, but I’ve change the theme again. Experimenting spree! 🙂
Wonderfully done Celestine a beautiful treat of three nice haiku …
Colorful new look 🙂
Thank you Kristjaan 🙂
You’re welcome Celestine …
the sweet agony of loving you- oh, yes, I remember that feeling! your haikus really are exceptional. I love the new look of your blog page.
I appreciate your comment, Nonnie. 🙂
❤ Love them! 🙂
Thanks Skye. 🙂
” I’m in hiding
from the sweet agony
of loving you”
You distill the tortured essence of an entire romance novel into one hailku. ((SIGH)) I have to rest my head on your feet again.
Oh Alice, what will I do without your lovely compliments? 🙂
And what would i do without your lovely poetry? 🙂
An enchanted princess? 🙂
Maybe 🙂
A lovely trio.
Thank you Karen.
The flower bloom the mirror of me. Those are words of self worth, very nice.
Thanks Kim 🙂 Sometimes my words reveal more than I intend 🙂
We’ve done our job as poets if everyone see something different in our words. 🙂
There can be an upside to exile! 😉
Too right! 🙂
sweet agony, a dreamy phrase…
Thanks Andrea 🙂
I have a friend who was dealt a harsh blow from her lover recently and in your words, I see my friend who loves but, is not loved in return.
“I’m in hiding
from the sweet agony
of loving you
3
in hiding from him
I watch the lone flower bloom
a mirror of me
Thanks Marie. Sometimes, my words evoke deeper feelings 🙂
lovely trio
Thanks Trisha 🙂