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Done for Mindmiserymenagerie, BastetsShardorma photo prompt. We are to look at these stairs and try to imagine where they’d take us. Or we could choose our own photos or art work and write about it!
(3-5-3-3-7-5)
I’m on a
pathway to nowhere
this distance
I call life
at once tortuous and joyful
but will I get there?
(1-2-3-4-1)
perhaps
Jacob’s ladder
might propel me
to reach there yet
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Copyright © Celestine Nudanu (19/05/14)
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.
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Interesting take on the prompt…likethe introspection and how you used the forms to such a effective advantage!
Thank you Georgia. I’ve been in a downward mood all day!
I think that’s got to do with spring…
I hope so and it’s a passing thing
Even the most beautiful blossoms
Or the twittering fof the birds
Sometimes don’t work their magic
When spring fever comes along…
A hug and hope you feel better today 🙂
I hope what awaits, or who at the top of the stairs makes the climb all the worthwhile.:)
Joyce, with Jesus at the top of the stairs, it will be a worthwhile climb. 🙂
Most definitely. I see now with your response you think like I do. 🙂
🙂
I hope that writing has lifted your mood 🙂
I’m much better today dear friend 🙂
Great.
Thank you Audrina 🙂
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Most grateful!
I love your reply to Joyce, Amen!!!
Amen! Marie, thanks 🙂
Jacobs ladder just may get you there. well done.
Ha ha ha! Thanks 🙂
I hadn’t heard of Jacob’s Ladder. But after this, I know. beautiful!
Glad you know now and thanks so much for coming by 🙂
“At once tortuous and joyful” That is the description of life. Well done.
Thank you sis!
It is amazing how so few words make so much sense, Celestine. Life is a pathway to nowhere.
Thanks Stella 🙂
Felling hopeful!
Thanks Rosy 🙂
I especially enjoy the reference to Jacob’s ladder. Nicely written.
Thank you Alice 🙂
I’ve sent you a special email. Do check your inbox and write to me. I’m off to the home now. Will read your response tomorrow morning!
Did. Thanks. 🙂
Life is surely a lot like you describe in this wonderful poem. I’m glad to say that I’m actually finding more joy as I get older, although I still live with (and always will live with) a mood disorder.
Thank you so much for visiting Poetry of the Netherworld.
My pleasure. 🙂 May God give you the grace to forge on 🙂
My favourite is the first one… But they are both just so lovely!
Thank you CC 🙂
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priceless pair. life truly is a journey of multiple colours…
Thank you Trisha!