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Done for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie – Heeding Haiku with HA. Be inspired and write a haiku or tanka from A Love Song from the North by Sarojini Naidu
Tell me no more of thy love papeeha
Wouldst thou recall to my heart, papeeha,
Dreams of delight that are gone,
When swift to my side came the feet of my lover
With stars of the dusk and the dawn?
I see the soft wings of the clouds on the river,
And jewelled with raindrops the mango-leaves quiver,
And tender boughs flower on the plain…..
But what is their beauty to me, papeeha,
Beauty of blossom and shower, papeeha,
That brings not my lover again?
Tell me no more of thy love, papeeha,
Wouldst thou revive in my heart, papeeha
Grief for the joy that is gone?
I hear the bright peacock in glimmering woodlands
Cry to its mate in the dawn;
I hear the black koel’s slow, tremulous wooing,
And sweet in the gardens the calling and cooing
Of passionate bulbul and dove….
But what is their music to me, papeeha
Songs of their laughter and love, papeeha,
To me, forsaken of love?
My Inspiration
above fluffy clouds
my love dirge ululating
with a choir of birds
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 28/05/14)I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom!
Simply stunning Celestine. Visually desirable if I may say, I see things when I read your words!
🙂
Ow thank you so much Sandra. Are you back to full blogging?
Yes! 🙂 I even published a post a few minutes ago.
Good! Checking it out now!
Cheers!
Lots of lovely imagery packed in here!
Thanks Gilly. Though I found the original poem very moving and lovely, I couldn’t do much justice to my inspiration.
Really enjoyed this, Celestine! 🙂
I’m glad to hear that Skye 🙂
There was a time long ago,
when I thought I would not be where I am now…
lost loves – their purpose unclear.
I would not change now what happened then –
for all that I now hold dear.
©JP/davh
(It didn’t start out as verse… but well ‘it’ happens. 🙂
Thank you. ~Jules
Oh Jules, wise words ne’er more spoken in such beautiful terms. I thank you. 🙂
Lovely…
Thank you Rosy
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What powerful writing and your Haiku a perfect compliment.
Thank you so much, Kim. is your post up yet? 🙂
Glad you responded this morning forgot to publish the blog hop.
What! Oh Please, let it come up, that is if it’s ready. Were you able to get someone to continue the blog hop?
Yes I got someone. It was ready Saturday I just had to make it public. I posted. I started walking in the mornings. I have to just get up and get out or I won’t do it. When I got back home I had my cereal and cantaloupe juice then sat to watch my programs I taped last night. Absent minded.
Oh good! Will check it out in a bit! 🙂 Never mind, I get more absent minded than you 🙂