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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to complete the following haiku by Yours Truly with  two lines of 7-7 syllables each. I feel deeply honoured that Kristjaan used my humble offering for the Tan renga prompt . Thanks a million!

Original

ribbon of colours

streaks across the endless sky

dance of the spirits

Completion

we waltz in  the misty dawn

bodies in mystic ritual

ribbon of colours

streaks across the endless sky

dance of the spirits

we waltz in  the misty dawn

bodies in mystic ritual

 
 
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 
(30/05/14)
I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.

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