Done for Carpe Diem.
Creek
down by the creek
we gaze at each other
sound of falling leaf
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu (18/06/14)I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.
Carpe Diem Prompt: Creek
18 Wednesday Jun 2014
Posted in Carpe Diem, Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
Reading Pleasure 
What a sweet image you paint
Ow, thanks so much Bjorn 🙂
This is classic haiku with a romantic lilt.It’s lovely and definitely your own style.
Alice
Ow Alice, I thank you so much. 🙂
🙂
It’s gentle.
Nana, thanks.
A true gem, darling! One of the rare ones when after reading the words slowly settle in…like a gently falling leaf… 🙂
Beautiful comment, Ese. Sincerely appreciated. 🙂
I love how you’ve gone from the larger scene — the lovers at the creek — to the barely perceptible falling leaf — so gentle and peaceful. Beautiful!
Jen, thanks so much. 🙂
🙂
Celestine, this is as peaceful and loving as you are. So good to see you around again.
janet
Oh Janet, what a lovely compliment. Thank you. 🙂 I’m actually excited to see you on CD. I had no idea you write haiku. Great! Hope to see you soon on FF. 🙂
I’m taking a break from FF to have more off-line time, but I’ll be back, probably in late August. We have lots of travel planned between now and then, so I’ll keep blogging but not something that takes so much time.
I see. Enjoy the breaks, Janet. 🙂
Romantic and sweet. Lovely afternoon you crafted
Thanks Audra. 🙂
This poem reminds me of when I started dating with my boyfriend (now husband) I love it! 🙂
Hahaahaaa! Thanks Sandra 🙂
Lovely…
Thank you Rosy. 🙂
hmm there is some romance behind that fluttering leaf
smile
You know it 🙂 Thanks for insisting! 🙂
that is one of the sweetest sounds.
🙂 Thanks!
{{ can be
an eternity
in one leaf’s journey … }}
x
🙂 Thanks!
Love is in the air …. nice romantic haiku Celestine.
Many thanks 🙂
My pleasure Celestine …
What a loud leaf. As always nice visual.
Smiling at your comment 🙂
Line two made me smile…lovely haiku!
Thanks Oliana. 🙂