Done for Carpe Diem. The idea is to a write a haiku in the same sense, tone and spirit as Lio Sogi’s haiku below. Then the challenge is to write a Troiku based on the haiku we produced out of Sogi’s:
Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening
My attempt
velvet evening
waiting for the moon
we melt into each other
Troiku
velvet evening
we trace the path
of the shooting stars
2
waiting for the moon
we follow the glow
of fireflies
3
we melt into each other
tracing the outline
of crystal dewdrops
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 15/01/15I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
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Fascinating!
Ow, thanks so much 🙂
very nice
i especially like 1 and 2
cheers
jzb
Glad to hear that. Thank you 🙂
I love the photo above and pretty verse to go with it.
Thank you Joyce.
Exquisite 🙂
Thanks Gilly.
Reading Pleasure, these are awesome images, here.
Thanks a million, Lolly.
I really liked this troiku you put together. It’s a nice way of expanding the concept of haiku, which, let’s face it, is rather limiting.
Yes, GF, haiku can be limiting. Thanks so much for coming by.
Your romantic voice melts my heart from a world away. 🙂
Ow, Alice. 🙂
🙂
Oh, very nicely done! I’m especially fond of your first haiku and the first haiku in your troika. Sweet, sensual, magical. 🙂
All the best,
Jen
Jean, thanks a million. 🙂
your haiku are magical. the troiku well, it took me to a trip in woods! thanks.
Trisha, I’m glad to hear that. The pleasure is all mine. 🙂
You are very good at this. 😀
Kiru, thanks l 🙂 I also admire you tremendously. 🙂
They’re all beautiful, Celeste, but I think the troiku is my favourite 🙂
Joanna, thanks. Good to see you here. 🙂
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Your romantic haiku are always a pleasure to read 🙂
Ah, thanks Amrit. 🙂
This is so romantic.. Such a place to be.
Indeed yes, Bjorn. 🙂
Beautiful, my friend!
Ese, thanks so much. 🙂
We melt into each other…
Very romantic!
🙂 I knew you would love it!