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Done for Carpe Diem.  The idea is to a write a haiku in the same sense, tone and spirit as Lio Sogi’s haiku below. Then the challenge is to write a Troiku based on the haiku we produced out of Sogi’s:

Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening

My attempt

velvet evening

waiting for the moon

we melt into each other

Troiku

velvet evening

we trace the path

of the shooting stars

2

waiting for the moon

we follow the glow

of fireflies

3

we melt into each other

tracing the outline

of crystal dewdrops

Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
15/01/15
 

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom

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