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Done for Carpe Diem Haiku Shuukan prompt, Intentions. And also for Recuerda Mi Corazon
Intentions
well-meaning plans
evaporate with the breeze
locked in her arms
2
precision of love
is based on intentions
he missed the mark
Haiku My Heart: Intentions
27 Friday Feb 2015
Posted in Carpe Diem, Challenges, Haiku, Haiku My Heart, Poetry
Reading Pleasure 
ah, when we miss the mark it is time to turn and try again.
Too true, Laura.
healing for heartbreak
good intentions take root through
right thoughts right action
Wonderful response, Rebecca.
Hmmmmm, maybe he should have been stronger in mind?
Just maybe. 🙂
Luckily her plans blew away in the breeze. It could have been worse had she settled with the one who missed the mark.
Lol, you’re right, Gemma 🙂
two interesting takes, seemingly i think more senryu than haiku; have a nice weekend
much love…
Thank you Gillena.
Second one is so visual…”he missed the mark.” Well done!!! Thank you!
Cathy, thanks. 🙂
This is the basis for a new romance novel. I like it. Simple and full.
Thank you, Alice. 🙂
🙂
those first two lines… are all the more real to me as a breeze blows outside my window as I read your offering today Celestine. Thank you so!
Lea, you are very welcome. Glad this resonated. 🙂
Oh, it’s so easy to miss the mark! But why???
Your guess is as good as mine. 🙂
lovely poetic creation ~ turn and turn again ~
Happy Weekend,
artmusedog and carol
Thank you Carol.
I like the softness of the first best!
So do I, Gilly 🙂
“Oh dear. Take more care”, she said.
🙂 Lol!
A short story in your haiku. Nicely penned.
Payal, thanks.
Nice take on the prompt. Missed intentions.
Thank you Audra.
He shouldn’t have missed -_-
I agree. 🙂
Loved the first haiku best! I can relate.
Kathy, thanks so much. Glad this resonated. 🙂
loved the first haiku! beautiful 🙂
Apurva, thank you. 🙂
I love the switch in perspectives. Fab. 🙂
Kiru, thanks. 🙂
he missed the mark- OUCH!
Yep. Wish he hadn’t. 🙂
stars not aligned
what will be will be
che sara sara! 🙂
What whatever will be:)
adorable and sweet!
Trisha, thanks. 🙂
second one, sometimes nothing works 😦
That’s true, 🙂