Done for Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge. And also for Recuerda Mi Corazon. We are to complete Shoha’s (1727-1772) haiku below with our own inspiration two of lines (preferably of 7-7 syllable each)
at the wagon’s approach,
out from the grass
flies the butterfly
Mine
dew droplets glitter on wings
drizzle sprays the morning walk
Tan Renga
at the wagon’s approach
out from the grass
flies the butterfly
dew droplets glitter on wings
drizzle sprays the morning walk
Reading Pleasure 
That’s really lovely. I can see it in my mind’s eye and feel the drizzle. I don’t think I could get too involved with this Japanese poetry. It is so beautiful, and makes me have to think! 🙂
Oh Judie, thanks so much. But haiku is quite simple really. And But you know what? I’m still learning everyday; not perfect yet so I guess that can be somewhat daunting but a challenge nevertheless. 🙂
So beautifully painted, but richly sensual too
Managua dear, thanks so much. 🙂
It’s the drizzle that does it! 😉
Exactly! 🙂
All wonderfully created completion to the haiku ~
Thank you Carol
Nothing like the beauty of a butterfly in the morning.
Yes Gemma. 🙂
Good to see you again Celestine … and what a beauty of a Tan Renga you have created by composing these two line to the haiku by Shoha. Thanks for sharing!
You are very welcome, Kristjaan. It’s always a pleasure to join CDHK when I can spare some time.
Well done 🙂
Thank you my friend.
What a beautiful butterfly.
Oh Alice, thanks. 🙂
🙂
Oh such a lovely completion filled with underlying sensuality.
Thank you Oliana. I don’t even know how the sensuality came out.
It is who you are…it is subtle, natural and always in good taste. bravo my dear.
Again I say thank you. 🙂
Gorgeous imagery, love the dew and drizzle.
Brenda, thank you so. 🙂
Nice completion!
Thank you Jazzy.
Hi Celestine,
I am inviting you to write a poem on love in ten lines. If interested follow link below. Might be fun!
https://thoughtsandentanglements.wordpress.com/2015/03/28/love-in-ten-lines/
Jazzy, thanks. The poem is out n my blog. 🙂 You could check it out if you have time. 🙂
A nice combination here … butterfly, dewdrops and drizzle
Thank you as always.
Those dew droplets mark the image…lovely, Celestine:)
Thank you Cheryl-Lynn 🙂
fresh, springlike abandon
Lenora, thank you so much for your kind words.
Kisses darling
Thank you dear. 🙂 Kisses right back. 🙂
Beautiful!
Thank you dear Rosy.
Dew droplets…a sign of freshness and dawn. Great piece, Celestine.
Thanks a million, Stella.
purely magical!
Trisha, your words made me smile 🙂