I’ve been invited by Jazzytower to write about love. The rules are below. It’s fun, if you choose to participate.
RULES
- Write about love using only 10 lines.
- Use “love” in every line.
- Each line can only be 4 words long.
- Nominate 10 or so others who are up for the challenge.
- Let them know about the challenge.
- Title the post, Love in Ten Lines
- Include a quote about love
Love In Ten Lines
I dream of love
where love finds me
comatose and bleeding love;
open raw love wounds
only love can heal
sealing them with love
kisses and more love
erasing scars with love
love amplifies my gratitude
for love completes me
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 30/03/15Quote
Love Conquers all
And Now The Nominees
(Those I thought of have already been nominated so I could only come up with the following) 🙂
Rosy of https://sharingmemyselfandi.wordpress.com/
Gilly of https://lucidgypsy.wordpress.com/
Audra of https://upchuckingwords.wordpress.com
Trisha of https://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/
very interesting your poem…I will propose you mine later on.. thank!
Date: Mon, 30 Mar 2015 17:27:13 +0000 To: kpascal36@hotmail.fr
Thank you Pascal. Looking forward to your poem. 🙂
Nicely done! Brava!! Love, Amy
Thank you Amy.
Captivatingly good Celestine! 🙂
Ow Sandra, thanks. Hope you are doing good. 🙂
Yes I am dear friend! 🙂
Help!!!
Lol, Gilly you can do it. I believe in you. 🙂
Beautiful poem. xx
Kiru, thank you. 🙂
Ah…Celestine, you win the love trophy with this piece, because…love completes me.
Fantastic!
Thank you my dear sis. 🙂
It is so tough to capture love in words!
You are right, Trisha. Love is complex. 🙂
you have written so beautifully !i just loved this post )
Thank you Hummingbird. 🙂
Love it! Love it! Especially “erasing scars with love” Thanks for participating:)
My Pleasure, Jazzy. I’m so happy you love this. 🙂
Beautiful
Nana, thanks.
I like it very much, Celestine!
Thank you Isi. Happy to hear that. 🙂
love-filled indeed 🙂
Yes. Thanks, Kokila.
Whoa! That’s quite the challenge.
And – you did a fantastic job!
You made that flow beautifully.
Meanwhile – my muse has some thoughts penned.
But – they are rather hodgepodge right now.
We’ll have to work on it a bit still. 😉
Rosy, you did it! Great! 🙂
Thanks dear Celestine! xo
You are welcome love 🙂
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there is no time limit, right? It is a fabulous topic and I will take some days to write it.
love.
No time limit, Trisha. So take your time. 🙂
thanks I have been playing with the word yesterday, first draft will be done today I think!
love
You made love look lovelier 🙂
Thanks for nominating me … I will give it a shot 🙂
You are welcome, Amrit. I know you can do it. Just link me to it when it is ready so I can come over. 🙂
I’m not into the whole host and follow thing, but I got involved with this particular one and combined it with another prompt, here (by randomly visiting Deanne – her blog in the links below the post) :
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/03/02/a-lovely-little-challenge-with-some-odd-rhymes-3-2-s/
i read it, Jules. Perfectly done is all I say. 🙂
I have fun combining challenges.
Except for a few good pieces, rhythm escapes me.
I can’t do the old metered stuff like sonnets, I just can’t hear it. 🙂
Love is sometimes a double edged beast and can be elusive but I the way you capture it is wonderful.
True, Ste J. Love is never a simple as we make it seem in our poems. but when one is lucky it is another thing altogether. ….Thank you. 🙂 Happy Easter.
here is mine:
https://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2015/04/04/love-in-ten-lines/
I just checked it out, Trisha, It’s great! 🙂
wonderful thoughts, Celestine!
Thank you Jane. 🙂
How did I miss this? It’s GREAT!
I took the challenge too and struggled immensely. Yours reads so smoothly and beautifully — WOW!
Thank you so, Jen. Oh is that so? Please let me have the link so I could go over and read. 🙂
You’re very welcome 🙂
Here you go: http://blogitorloseit.com/2015/03/28/loves-a-hot-needle-love-in-ten-lines/
Love this…. Love In Ten words indeed
Thank you 🙂