Done for Haiku Horizons.
Needle
steel thorns
amongst the roses
parting gift
2
lips bleed
on the roses
steel thorns
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 13/04/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
13 Monday Apr 2015
Posted Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
inDone for Haiku Horizons.
Needle
steel thorns
amongst the roses
parting gift
2
lips bleed
on the roses
steel thorns
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 13/04/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
This caused my heart pain (in a good way). Lovely.
Thank you. Good to know it was a good pain. 🙂
🙂
Beautiful…Love the imagery you evoked with your words. ♥
Thank you Kathy.
Ooo heart-breaking!
🙂 Thanks.
Thought provoking. Thank you for challenging my brain. 🙂
My pleasure, Nicole. 🙂
scary, huh? some relationships are just like that, daggers dipped in honey!
You said it all, Trisha. 🙂
Graphical ! loved the imagery …
Thanks dear.
I love it, such red imagery slipping between the delicate and the sharp.
Ste J, thanks my friend. 🙂
interesting imagery in these haiku!
Freya, thanks.
Oooof!!!
Love stings sometimes. Great haiku 🙂
Jen, thanks.
great imagery, Celestine! although sad
Thank you Oliana.
I loved the contrasting images here.
Glad to hear that.