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shame
brief moment
my only sin
is wanting you
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 18/05/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Haiku Horizons: Shame
18 Monday May 2015
Posted in Challenges, Haiku, Poetry, Romance
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Lovely haiku my friend.
Thank you so much, Kimmy. So good to see you here after a long spell. I trust you are feeling much much better now. So thrilled to see your anthology of poetry out there on Amazon. Simply great my dear friend. 🙂
Thank you Celestine. I wish I could say I’m doing better. I’m in a bad lupus flare. I spend a lot of time in bed so I turned on the notification so I can at least keep up with my friends.
So sorry to read this, Kimmy. But you are one strong lady with a never give up spirit. Always in my prayers my sis. 🙂
Thank you love.
You are welcome, my dear. 🙂
SIGH. Lovely.
Alice, thanks. 🙂
🙂
No sin committed 🙂
Only in my imagination. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Annabelle. 🙂
I agree with Lucid Gypsy. 🙂
🙂 Thanks Amy.
shame on the other person for not responding…no sin in wanting:) lovely haiku
It’s sin when you want what is not yours, though. 🙂
Well to want and just dream is not…;)
🙂 Agreed!
wonderful.
Suzanne, thanks. 🙂
Powerful piece! I loved it.
Thank you Noora. 🙂
The pleasure was all mine! I love your work.
🙂
I love it. Shame is not my favorite word, especially how it’s used here to make children feel bad when they shouldn’t. I love the way used it.
Thanks Nana. I get your point. The word shame has been abused here and children are made to feel so much shame for being just children when all they need is a kind admonishing at best.
no more needed to express shame . Well done
Leslie, thanks.
Hi… 🙂
You captured the unresistant exactly.
Jeyanthi, thank you.
Excellent.. deep..very deep.. Liked it..
Ramesh, thank you so much. 🙂
Hot ! 🙂
Thanks, Rall. 🙂
What a grave sin, if the lover was a flop! Pathetic but so true in reality.
No the lover is not a flop. The sin is in wanting a man or woman that belong to someone else. 🙂
Loving someone who can never be yours just sucks! I hope he or she gets over it and moves on asap. Lol!
I love this. It says so much! ♥
Thank you Kathy.
A big kiss darling
Thank you 🙂
sometimes love truly sounds like sin/mistake!
I agree, dear friend. 🙂
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That’s a pretty good one.
Thank you Alok. 🙂
and how lovely is that…. 🙂
Thank you for your visit Celestine 🙂
My pleasure, Archana. I appreciate your comment. 🙂
this made me blush … simplistic. yet very sensual
Stacy, thanks so much for the compliment. 🙂
LOVE this.
Thank you. 🙂
Welcome.
But can there ever be a shame in such a deep longing?
No, Amrit. There’s no shame in wanting someone; perhaps the shame is only in wanting someone who belongs to another. 🙂
Oh, nice concept. I love it!
Thank you, Utalap!
Oh my!
🙂 Thanks my dear. 🙂