Tags
Africa, canoe, fish, lagoon, livelihood, Motherhood, Nature, Poverty
Done for Carpe Diem. And also for Recuerda Mi Corazon.
unsold fish
a mother’s reflection
darkens the lagoon
2
gurgles
listing canoe
drinking up the lagoon
26 Friday Jun 2015
Posted Carpe Diem, Challenges, Haiku, Haiku My Heart, Poetry
inTags
Africa, canoe, fish, lagoon, livelihood, Motherhood, Nature, Poverty
Done for Carpe Diem. And also for Recuerda Mi Corazon.
unsold fish
a mother’s reflection
darkens the lagoon
2
gurgles
listing canoe
drinking up the lagoon
Beautifully put together.
Ow, thanks, Alok. 🙂
So many stories… in these few, small words Celestine.
Yes indeed, Lea. Thanks, as always.
Both are good. Unique.
Thank you Nana.
These are great lines. Puts me right there. Nicely penned!
Judie, thank you.
Another water theme for you!
Yes oo! 🙂
oh, I don’t want to be in THAT canoe!
Neither do I 🙂
Creative thought.
Kimmy, thanks, as always. 🙂
Lovely haiku with the lagoon ~ two very different ones ~ both well composed ~
Happy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol
Many thanks, artmusedog and Carol. Hope your weekend was great.
Oh my, isn’t that lovely!
Dell, many thanks.
Reblogged this on hamstarcreatives and commented:
an appreciation of HAIKU
Thank you Hamster.
Reminds me of today where I am at; farmers market, celebration along the river…
stands selling, canoe races, houseboat parade… though I’ll just view it from my room. Water precious and priceless.
I’m just a tad tourist-ed out. So I think I shall avoid the crowd. 🙂
It would be fun I’m sure. 🙂
Quite interesting, 2 really nice haiku
Much love…
Thank you Gillena.
Your words paint a lovely picture.
Gemma, thank you.
Beautiful flow between the two haiku.
Laura, thank you, as always. 🙂
loved them both!
Trisha, thanks.
Dark and mysterious things going on in that lagoon!
Strange indeed!
Lovely.
Kiru, thanks.
Poor canoe paddler! Into the drink she goes!
LOL 🙂
What an image you have drawn in the second one Celestine ! though loved them both 🙂
Kokila, thank you so much.