Tags
Africa, canoe, fish, lagoon, livelihood, Motherhood, Nature, Poverty
Done for Carpe Diem. And also for Recuerda Mi Corazon.
unsold fish
a mother’s reflection
darkens the lagoon
2
gurgles
listing canoe
drinking up the lagoon
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 26/06/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
Alok Singhal said:
Beautifully put together.
readinpleasure said:
Ow, thanks, Alok. 🙂
Lea said:
So many stories… in these few, small words Celestine.
readinpleasure said:
Yes indeed, Lea. Thanks, as always.
Nana Prah said:
Both are good. Unique.
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Nana.
judie said:
These are great lines. Puts me right there. Nicely penned!
readinpleasure said:
Judie, thank you.
Lucid Gypsy said:
Another water theme for you!
readinpleasure said:
Yes oo! 🙂
Nonnie said:
oh, I don’t want to be in THAT canoe!
readinpleasure said:
Neither do I 🙂
silentlyheardonce said:
Creative thought.
readinpleasure said:
Kimmy, thanks, as always. 🙂
artmusedog said:
Lovely haiku with the lagoon ~ two very different ones ~ both well composed ~
Happy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol
readinpleasure said:
Many thanks, artmusedog and Carol. Hope your weekend was great.
DELL CLOVER said:
Oh my, isn’t that lovely!
readinpleasure said:
Dell, many thanks.
Hamstar said:
Reblogged this on hamstarcreatives and commented:
an appreciation of HAIKU
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Hamster.
julespaige said:
Reminds me of today where I am at; farmers market, celebration along the river…
stands selling, canoe races, houseboat parade… though I’ll just view it from my room. Water precious and priceless.
I’m just a tad tourist-ed out. So I think I shall avoid the crowd. 🙂
readinpleasure said:
It would be fun I’m sure. 🙂
gillena said:
Quite interesting, 2 really nice haiku
Much love…
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Gillena.
gemma said:
Your words paint a lovely picture.
readinpleasure said:
Gemma, thank you.
Laura Hegfield said:
Beautiful flow between the two haiku.
readinpleasure said:
Laura, thank you, as always. 🙂
Sharmishtha Basu said:
loved them both!
readinpleasure said:
Trisha, thanks.
Mark M. Redfearn said:
Dark and mysterious things going on in that lagoon!
readinpleasure said:
Strange indeed!
Kiru Taye said:
Lovely.
readinpleasure said:
Kiru, thanks.
magicalmysticalteacher said:
Poor canoe paddler! Into the drink she goes!
readinpleasure said:
LOL 🙂
kokilagupta said:
What an image you have drawn in the second one Celestine ! though loved them both 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Kokila, thank you so much.