Done for A Prompt Each Day. Inspired by the photo below:
Shadows
ghosts
flickering lantern
reveals their shadow
2
moonless night
grandma dispelling shadows
with her flickering lantern
3
I write your name with soot
on the mud wall
but it is blown away
by that breath of wind
from the wicker of the lantern
and with it you are gone
4
flickering soot
wiping my memory
of you
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 16/07/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
wow these are intense! They’re cold and eerie , each one telling a story.. fabulous!
Thank you Mandy. he eeriness was lost on me until I read your comment. 🙂
Loved all, but the 3rd is my favorite 🙂
Amrit, thanks. 🙂
This is all so good–but I especially liked the part about grandma.
Dell, my favourite too, and the last one. 🙂
I love the second one, but I don’t know the word ‘sooth’:-)
Oh Gilly, you are right, I meant soot. 🙂
hahaha okay got it!
lovely and poignant series 🙂
Thank you Ladylee. Enjoy the weekend. 🙂
priceless! next time write it with a chisel on stone! 🙂
that lantern was nostalgic! it was a part of household essentials before emergency lights showed up!
Too right, Trisha. They are a great relic! 🙂
this is lovely – quite eerie but beautiful at the same time…
Freya, thank you. Hope you are doing great. 🙂
I hope Grandma never forgets you or me. 🙂
She won’t, my dear. 🙂