Done for Haiku My Heart and for Carpe Diem.
A revision of my favourite Basho Haiku
dashed to bits
Cherry blossoms in Yoshino
I tried not to deviate too much from the tone and spirit. 🙂
scent of cherry blossoms
fills the gap
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 14/08/15
Forest Tinker said:
Mmmmm – a soft scented chat.
payal agarwal said:
ll y a des fleurs partout pour qui veut bien les voir. henry matisse
“there are always flowers for those who want to see them.”
your haiku filled my senses with cherry blossoms, thank you.
What a lovely quote, Rebecca. And I am more than happy that this haiku affected you so. 🙂
Celestine, that is just so beautiful…
Thank you Lea. 🙂
Oh, I like the way you fill the gaps!
J C said:
sweet, sweet bedroom talk. 🙂
Judie, thanks .
Lucid Gypsy said:
Uh umm I love bedroom talk!
So do I my dear. 🙂
seeps through the curtains
__An inspired and humble senryu echo… to complement. _m
Magyar, this is simply beautiful. 🙂 I love it. Thanks for making my day.
Alice Keys said:
This is lovely.
lovely choice … and it does sound rather like a bit of a tiff … love how your revisited it!
Thanks Georgia. I really don’t even know what I meant. A tiff could work just fine. 🙂
Cool .. 🙂
Ste J said:
Your words always have a pleasantly intoxicating nature about them and never fail to bring contentment.
And your compliments always bring much joy to me, my friend. 🙂
Beautiful and full of visual words.
Thank you Kimmy. 🙂
An exquisite haiku dear Celestine. Have a nice weekend
milan rajkumar said:
ecstatic and lofty , Celestine !
Oh Milan, thanks as always. 🙂
Seyi sandra said:
Another great Haiku Celestine!
Sandra, thank you. 🙂
Nope, no deviations whatsoever! 🙂
Oh thanks, Kutukamus. Glad to hear that! It’s good seeing you here. 🙂
sharmishtha basu said:
Kiru Taye said:
Ooh, sweet pillow talk.
Yes! Kiru, hope you are good.My visit to your blog is long overdue. 🙂
Nomzi Kumalo said:
Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16) said:
Thank you Kathy.
Oh, I do love how this one turned out:)
Glad to heat that. 🙂
ah yes and her pick up turned smile (lovely Celestine)
Leslie, thank you. 🙂
Stella Eromonsere-Ajanaku said:
Pillow talk between cherry blooms. Romantic for sure. Happy new week, Celestine.
Thank you Stella. For sure romance is in the air. Have a great week. 🙂