Done for Carpe Diem. Modern Times Haiku (Following the Summer footprints of Margaret Chula)
his early heat
a carp arches
into the raindrops
© Margaret Chula
My haiku in the same spirit and tone as Margaret Chula’s above:
Heat
noonday heat
a lizard basks
in yesterday’s raindrops
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 18/08/15
I like the stillness in your haiku. Very nice.
Alice, thanks.
🙂
Cute Celestine. I enjoyed.
I’m glad. 🙂
Celestine this is absolutely lovely. The last line resonates with me. Well done! p.s. thanks for introducing me to Margaret Chula 🙂
Parmis, you are so welcome. So happy this had an impact on you. Margaret Chula’s works are amazing. Enjoy her to the maximum. 🙂
Celestine, I really like this one.
Thank you so, Charming Yellow. 🙂
Celestine, you have painted a vivid African picture. Brings back memories of Agama lizards dancing in the blazing Nigerian sunshine.
Oh dear Stella, you captured my thoughts beautifully. 🙂
Stunning Celestine !
Thank you Cressida. 🙂
Wonderful scene Celestine …
Thank you Chev. 🙂
fantastic duo!
Thank you my dear. 🙂