Done for Haiku Horizons.

Storm
raging storm
stranger seeks shelter
in my heart
2
in my heart
a storm is brewing
deception
3
empty conch
sound of rising storm
echoing
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
05/10/15
05 Monday Oct 2015
Posted Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
inDone for Haiku Horizons.
Storm
raging storm
stranger seeks shelter
in my heart
2
in my heart
a storm is brewing
deception
3
empty conch
sound of rising storm
echoing
My favorite of your offerings:
raging storm
stranger seeks shelter
in my heart
‘m glad to know there’s plenty of room in there.
Ow, thanks Alice. 🙂 There’s always plenty room for you in my heart. LOL! 🙂
🙂
a hell lot of meaning out there… brilliantly done Celestine… 🙂
Thank you so much, Archana.
I love the idea of a stranger seeking shelter in one’s heart!
After the Dust Storm
Thank you MMT 🙂
Very nice Haiku Set. I too especially like the first one and can identify with the second 😊
Thank you so Leonas.
Awww…beautifully done! ….But, my fave is the last one, Celestine 🙂 Superb!
Many thanks my dear. 🙂 I also like the third one most. 🙂
I love the first one too. The last line is the clincher. Well done!
Thank you Wallace. 🙂
Hi Celestine!
I was recently nominated to participate in a three-day quote challenge and wanted to nominate you as well. I would love to see which three quotes you find most meaningful! And as always, beautiful post 🙂
https://hurdlestohappiness.wordpress.com/2015/10/05/three-day-quote-challenge-day-1/
Thank you Danbalva. 🙂
Simply amazing! I love the marvelous depth of this write. And the imagery of the stranger sheltering in the heart is fascinating.
Daniel, many thanks for your lovely comment. 🙂
You’re welcome 🙂
Of all three, I especially like the first, and want to know–did you give the stranger shelter???? (First Haiku I’ve read that makes me want to know what I think, but what the poet thinks…like a story begging an ending… ) Thank you!!!!
Oh Cbhanek, I certainly gave the stranger shelter in my heart. 🙂 But then one cannot be too sure these days. So I only gave him a little space. LOL 🙂
🙂 Love it! God bless you!
God bless you too.
These are lovely, and I agree with Alice–my fave part too. Do you have room for one more, I wonder 🙂
Only one more room for you. 🙂
Oh Yaaaayyyyy! I’m so glad to have found you again–I’ve forgotten which blog name you knew me as before…but it doesn’t matter 🙂
I think it does since I love to address all my blogger friends by their names. 🙂
Well, since I don’t remember, I guess we’re stuck with “J” (Jael) 🙂
beautiful…..loved all of them….read my take here….http://istoppedtosmellarose.blogspot.com/2015/10/birth-of-storm.html
Thank you. 🙂
A heart can never be too big.
Indeed! 🙂
I really love how the two ideas are linked and flow seamlessly from one haiku to the next. Your third offering is vividly brilliant as well. Nice job!♥
Thank you Kathy 🙂
Ah ! These are so beautiful ! The first one is ecstatic ! I like the deception part in the second one and the last one is ethereal ! Magic Celestine ,simply magic !
Milan, most grateful for your comment. 🙂
Brilliant haikus
Thank you Ruby.
Sometimes when families ‘storm’…the best thing to do is just walk away.
That’s very true, Jules. 🙂
Awesome, especially the first one. Loved the set. 🙂
Balqis, thank you. 🙂
Love the “stranger seeks shelter in your heart!”
Thank you, Nicole. 🙂
Wow! Very nice set!
Delores, thanks.