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irst tasteDone for Carpe Diem
“Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby.” Langston Hughes.
Late Showers
late showers
kiss my nudity
his first taste
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 25/08/16
Ooooh lala!! 🙂
LOL, Oliana. Hot isn’t it? 🙂
Yep, my kinda hot 😉
Yeah, I know. Two of a kind, aren’t we? 🙂
😉
Ai ai ai….her seductive side…. 😉
Lovely!
Thanks, Ese. You made me laugh loud 🙂
🙂
Very, very sexy.
Nana, thanks a million. 🙂
Goodness…..wantonly gorgeous…
Ow Hamish. 🙂
Naughty, naughty – but nice 🙂
LOL Gilly. Good to be naughty sometimes. 🙂
I agree with that ooh la la 🙂
Thank you Pat.
Quite evocative I must say, Celestine. Hot!
Thank you Stella.
Hi Celestine, a very, very nice poem with a deep meaning in it. Though it looks romantic, in general, I look at it in a different angle: “ the human mind and body is dirty with clumsy thoughts; though late showers ( HOLY THOUGHTS ) but not last showers, they cleanse our mind and body when we are prepared for it. Nudity of Mind is a purified mind and one shall have the will power to look at one’s own nude mind as we, the humans, always camouflage our erring mind. Ah! that must be your first kiss of taste!!
Thanks a million, Madhavar. Your deep and insightful critique of my haiku is very much appreciated. 🙂 I really like your angle and goes to show that there is no limit or cut out prescription to poetry appreciation;. 🙂 Thank you.
very beautiful!
Thank you Trisha. 🙂