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Adjei Agyei Baah, Africa, Afriku, Ancient Roads, culture, Nature, tradition
Done for Carpe Diem.
We are to complete the following haiku by Adjei Agyei Baah, with our own two lines of 7-7 syllables each.
© Adjei Agyei-Baah
ancient road
the trails of the masters
absorbed in fallen leaves
Mine
I tread ever so cautious
the souls not to resurrect
Tan Renga
ancient road
the trails of the masters
absorbed in fallen leaves
I tread ever so cautious
the souls not to resurrect
adaspoetryalcove said:
Lovely imagery evoked!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Dolores. 🙂
Nana Prah said:
Nice.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Nana. 🙂
elaine patricia said:
Beautiful
readinpleasure said:
Thank you, Elaine. 🙂
Chèvrefeuille said:
Nicely created second stanza Celestine. Good to see you here again. I had already forseen that you would be in this challenge with the “hokku” by Adjei.
readinpleasure said:
LOL, Krisjaan, you know me very well. It’s good to be back though. As you know I have been busy with submissions and polishing of my haiku on other platforms. But I will never forget you and CDHK. 🙂
Gillena Cox said:
of course; they should rest in peace until the appointed time
much love
readinpleasure said:
LOL yes! Trust you are doing great, Gillena. 🙂
Adjei Agyei-Baah said:
calm and untroubled scene created here Celestine. Surely the masters must sleep peacefully and draw comfort from the trails they left behind !!!
readinpleasure said:
Indeed they must sleep. Thanks my brother. Your ku is just great. 🙂
jazzytower said:
Love it:)
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Pat. 🙂