Done for Recuerda Mi Corazon.
The cherita was created by al li in June 1997. So the cherita is 20 years old! 🙂 Cherita means story! 🙂 A story in just six lines, but a complete story nevertheless. 🙂 Hope you enjoy my cherita below: 🙂
I slip through
the crack in your dreams
if only to get there early
for the kiss
that is rightfully mine
© Celestine Nudanu 23/06/17
Links for Haiku Rhapsodies:
Nana Prah said:
A rather romantic cherita. I like it a lot.
Thank you my friend.
Thanks a million, Cecilia. 🙂
Ah, sometimes we must be bold and claim those kisses, mustn’t we? 🙂
For sure, MMT 🙂
so romantic my friend!
Thank you so. 🙂
I LOVE your cherita!
Judie, thanks:-) I’m glad.
Creative cherita and bold ~ ^_^
Thanks for visiting and commenting on my blog ~ ^_^
Thank you Carol. Always a pleasure to visit. 🙂
Enjoy? Celestine I too… LOVE your cherita! Slip through the crack in your dreams… just brilliant!
Ow, many thanks Lea. 🙂 Thinking of coming out with a book of cheritas
Love you sneaking into the cracks of my dreams. Here is a little kiss x.
Ow, Mwah! 🙂
Lucid Gypsy said:
This is new to me, lovely. I know you’ll be good at this!
Gilly, thanks, always. 🙂 I just loved the simplicity of it. No hard and fast rules like the haiku.
Lovely Charita Celestine. Have a good Sunday
Gillena, thank you. 🙂
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