The Cherita was created by al li. I’ve fallen in love with this lovely poetry form. And for each working day I shall endeavour to post a cherita a day on my blog. 🙂
fall to pieces
as you strum
on the breeze
© Celestine Nudanu 01/08/17
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Adjei Agyei-Baah said:
beautiful cherita packed with so many beautiful interpretations…to me, you capture an aching lover dying slowing at the hands of an uncaring lover…the rest i leave for others to express their thoughts…Always a delight to read your pieces and will secretly beg for MORE!
LOL, my brother. I won’t say you are wrong. Poetry has many interpretations as you sad. Thanks for the visit. 🙂
Thinking of ABBA. 🙂
Claire 'Word by Word' said:
Beautiful Celeste, always love your poems, inspired.
Thank you so much Claire. =D
Seductive as the beauty of the land in which you live
Oh Eva, such lovely words. Thank you. 🙂
This one had me thinking and rereading again, Celestine. Still uncertain as to what the meaning is but the words in of themselves moved me deeply. Beautiful!! ☺️
Thank you Amy. LOl, poetry is open to different interpretations. I’m sure I was writing about making love, with the breeze and cool music playing slowly in the background. Silly me. 🙂
No, not silly. Just you being you! 🙂
Thank you for introducing me to another form of poetry. I think I’m in love. I’ve been trying to find time to read all your beautiful poems.
Yes, Delores, it’s been awhile. I know the feeling right, Cherita has me hooked. 🙂
Sharmishtha Basu said:
Ow, thanks. 🙂