The Cherita was created by al li.
credits: http://www.thecherita.com/
Morning Coffee
my morning coffee
sugar-less
but creamy
so is your kiss
not sweet
but full
(linked to Recuerda Mi Corazon.)
Links for Haiku Rhapsodies:
25 Friday Aug 2017
Posted African Women Writers, al li, Challenges, Cherita, Micropoetry, Poetry, Romance
inThe Cherita was created by al li.
credits: http://www.thecherita.com/
Morning Coffee
my morning coffee
sugar-less
but creamy
so is your kiss
not sweet
but full
(linked to Recuerda Mi Corazon.)
Links for Haiku Rhapsodies:
There are definitely “clouds” in your coffee Celestine! Do you know that Carly Simon song, “Your so Vain”? (She is not talking about you but the man in her life!!!) That is the first thing that popped into my head in reading your cherita! Well done!
Thank you Lea. I haven’t heard this song before, but for sure some men can be vain, including mine. 🙂
My morning coffee is thick and creamy and sweet. I wonder what that says about me 🙂
Great expressions here, as usual. Keep sharing.
Ow thanks Run Wright. 🙂
Coffee and kisses somehow go together, don’t they? Mmmm….
You bet! 🙂
Oh, this is lovely. I’m always amazed at how much sensory lushness you are able to pour into so few words.
Diana, I don’t know how I do it 🙂 Thanks, as always. 🙂
I loooove your Cheritas, Celestine! So few words, so much meaning.
Ow thanks, Judie. At your service. 🙂
Aw…Total sweetness 🙂
Sumana, thanks.
:-))
Greetingd from Germany
Jutta, good to see you here. 🙂
perfect……
Thank you Rebecca. 🙂
I will buy this cherita at any amount…adding it up to my other favorites read here Cel
Ow, thanks a million. You won’t be disappointed. 🙂
none works for me!
LOL 🙂
I haven’t tried this form yet. Is it always short or can the lines be longer?
Kisses 😉
It’s such a lovely form, Jules. Most cheritas I have come across are short, but I believe there can be innovations. Hugs and kisses my dear friend. 🙂
🙂 I just tried the form in a comment on another of your posts ~
And I added cherita to my Gems poetry form page with a link to both The Cherita and your blog 😉
Ow, how wonderful. Thanks for the shutout my dear. 🙂
Will be reading your cherita soon. 🙂