Thursday Shadorma: Surrender

Tags

breath, fever, hrizons, Nature, orgasm, romance, sensuality, setting sun, Total Surrender, twilight

The photo is by kind permission of Gilly.

Surrender

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when

I close

my fevered eyes

I feel the sun

setting

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on the lids

its fading warmth a

mere whisper

of a kiss

a breath really, as it bids

farewell over horizons

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I

can only

then open them

and  exhale in orgasmic

surrender

Copyright © Celestine Nudanu

16/04/15

 

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Carpe Diem Special: Breath

Tags

breath, Buddha, Nature, silence, Water

Done for Carpe Diem. Based on Santoka Taneda’s haiku below, we are to write our own in the same sense, tone and spirit. 

in the ceaseless sound
of the water
there is Buddha

Mine

in the silence

Buddha’s breath

stirs the pond

2

ripples

the pond sways

Buddha’s breath

Copyright © Celestine Nudanu

10/03/15

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Haiku Horizons: Gift

Tags

breath, gift, March, Nature, season

Done for Haiku Horizons.

waiting to inhale

this gift of March

a scented breath

Copyright © Celestine Nudanu

02/03/15

 

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom