Thursday Shadorma: Surrender

Tags

breath, fever, hrizons, Nature, orgasm, romance, sensuality, setting sun, Total Surrender, twilight

The photo is by kind permission of Gilly.

Surrender

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when

I close

my fevered eyes

I feel the sun

setting

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on the lids

its fading warmth a

mere whisper

of a kiss

a breath really, as it bids

farewell over horizons

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I

can only

then open them

and  exhale in orgasmic

surrender

Copyright © Celestine Nudanu

16/04/15

 

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom

Poet At Play – Total Surrender

Tags

Total Surrender

Total Surrender

 

The first day

I met you

I was

Hooked.

 

Your masculine

Tobacco musk

A dizzying

Aphrodisiac

Pulled me in

 

Let me

Breath in

Or I die

 

Your voice

A deep

Sexy

Timbre

Sent me

Spiralling

Out of control

 

Your magnetic

Touch

Electric

Set me ablaze

 

Your eyes

Pools of eros

Drew me in

And I waded

Deep.

 

Your body

Hard

Lean

And oozing

Held me captive

I succumbed

To the thrust

 

Thirsty,

Streams

Of passion

Flowing from

Your pores

Quenched

My parched

Essence.

 

Hungry,

Tthe warmth

And surge

Of your longing

Fed me

And sated

I could only offer

My body

In total

Surrender.

 

© Celestine Nudanu

1/09/12

 

I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom! 🙂