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Grimace
a grimace
is she seeing right?
locked shadows
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu (13/1/14) I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! ShalomHaiku Heights Prompt: Grimace
13 Monday Jan 2014
Posted in Challenges, Haiku, Poetry
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lovely! 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Great last line to this. Nice one.
Thank you so. It’s been a while Anthony. Will visit you soon!
Love the enigmatic nature to this one; Happy New Year to you as well 🙂
Many thanks WC!
A bit mysterious. What exactly is she seeing? I can only venture to guess.
Oh Nana, she is seeing two bodies locked together in a tight embrace!
Fabulous haiku. Romantic. But I feel silly tonight. 😉
locked shadows
so she finds the key
cold water
There is nothing silly about romance, Alice. 🙂
cold water
on entwined shadows
total shock
You’ve got that one right.:-)
total shock
my mother and dad
at their age?
at their age
she was helping him with
his bad back
his bad back!
with back to the wall?
caught pants down!
Love this, so perfect…you just keep doing it, fantastic.
Thanks Ste J. 🙂
Nice one..loved it.. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Intriguing Celestine ♡
Or not at all! 🙂
Beautiful writing.
Thanks, Kim
True haiku, in that it is enigmatic !
Thanks 4joy! 🙂
Nice 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Mirror or another’s face? Either way, great last line!
Thanks Eva. She is seeing shadows of two bodies entwined!
Oh no! Is this the start of a sad story? Hope not but I loved the haiku!
Could be! Thank you so 🙂
Excellent imagery!!!
Thank you dear one!
Poor thing, she must have been shocked and heart-broken…
That’s right. 🙂
Thank you for the locking shadows explanation
I would never have guessed it was an in flagrante delicto situation.
But then again I am a very unworldly person:)
LOL! I do love your ‘unworldly haiku, a lot! 🙂
well, i am liking the locked shadows… 🙂 good one, Celestine!!
Thanks as always!
You are invited to Rall’s Rollin On Heights next week . See ya there!
Sure, Thanks a million!
Celistine , Wow what a romantic haiku ! Loved the ‘locked shadows’.
Thank you so much, ma’am. 🙂
If only there was some sun to see a shadow…
While I have to be here – I not needed today, yet must report to prove I was here.
And must call again to see if I am needed tomorrow. An odd process get several hundred people to fill 12 spots. But there is more to it than meets the eye – since so many can be rejected by either side and several passes. Or rejection without reason. So a solicitor or lawyer can just say I don’t want that juror.
Weather – still rainy and now foggy too.
Glad I brought my rain coat. 🙂
I am sure you will be selected or that journey would have been in vain. Is this our first time?
They always have two or three times as many people – so the lawyers can reject prospective jurors for any number of reasons. Once local in another state. Second call for this state…but it was as you say in vain – but I’m not complaining to be home. I’m just unsure if since I was called twice and let go that they will call me again in six months or a year…
locked shadows, now i know why the grimace, well done !
Thank you Cheryl 🙂
Suddenly reminds me of Pearl Buck’s” Letter from Peking”
beautiful (y) !
locked shadows
gripped her tight
Letter from Peking.
A lovely response, Milan. Thank you 🙂
🙂
One day I will write haikus like yours.
Amen oo! 🙂