Haiku Horizons: Forget 02 Monday Nov 2015 Posted by readinpleasure in Challenges, Haiku, Poetry ≈ 28 Comments TagsDeath, forget, Nature, parting, stars Done for Haiku Horizon Forget dreaming of the stars you forgot to say goodbye that final journey Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 02/11/15 Rate this:Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like Loading... Related
milan rajkumar said:
Ah ! That’s life ! Your words are always moving ,Celestine !
readinpleasure said:
Milan, thank you.
Nana Prah said:
I like it. It’s all about hope.
readinpleasure said:
Yes, it’s all about hope.
Lucid Gypsy said:
Beautiful, is there an anniversary soon?
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Gilly, Probably my birthday which is today.
Lucid Gypsy said:
Well I hope it’s a very happy one and that your burst ahead is filled with joy and blessings 😀
readinpleasure said:
Thank you Gilly. 🙂
J Lapis said:
Oh My, that tugs the heart, doesn’t it. Lovely.
readinpleasure said:
It does, Jael. 🙂
J Lapis said:
🙂
Ramesh Sood said:
very touching.. I liked it a lot…
I am here. Do visit me here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2015/10/he-touches-her-dreams.html
readinpleasure said:
Ramesh thanks;.
Kiru Taye said:
Moving and lovely
readinpleasure said:
Kiru, thanks.
danielschwamm said:
Such a moving write, Celestine! Makes me look…:)
readinpleasure said:
Thanks Daniel.
danielschwamm said:
You’re welcome! 🙂
Stella Eromonsere-Ajanaku said:
I hope you are not writing about death. How awful. Yet, we must always hope for a better tomorrow, Celestine 😆
readinpleasure said:
The words popped out on their own Stella. All we have is hope. 🙂
Amrit Sinha said:
The final journey, blissful yet sad.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Amrit. It always is. 🙂
julespaige said:
This reminds me of when my father passed…
He had so many tubes…he could not speak.
But that last hand squeeze (sigh).
readinpleasure said:
I was actually thinking of death when I wrote this. The third anniversary of my father’s death is just around the corner. 🙂
Bastet said:
poignant …
readinpleasure said:
Thank you. 🙂
Sharmishtha Basu said:
so beautiful!
readinpleasure said:
Thank you my friend. 🙂