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Done for Recuerda Mi Corazon
First Smile
merry-go-round
the dizzying spell
of my son’s first smile
(Failed Haiku Issue 15, Journal of English Senryu, March 2017)
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 03/03/17Links for Haiku Rhapsodies:
03 Friday Mar 2017
Posted African Women Writers, Challenges, Haiku, Haiku My Heart, Micropoetry, Poetry
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Done for Recuerda Mi Corazon
First Smile
merry-go-round
the dizzying spell
of my son’s first smile
(Failed Haiku Issue 15, Journal of English Senryu, March 2017)
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 03/03/17Links for Haiku Rhapsodies:
Sharmishtha Basu said:
And first words?
readinpleasure said:
That too 🙂
rebecca said:
i cannot even begin to share how deeply i love this first smile,this perfect motherlove haiku! thank you friend
readinpleasure said:
Ow, Rebecca. You are very welcome. I love it too. 🙂
judie said:
definitely a heart-warming experience.
readinpleasure said:
Indeed yes!
magicalmysticalteacher said:
This is such a precious moment!
readinpleasure said:
Indeed yes!
Lea said:
What a beautiful moment of pure joy Celestine!
readinpleasure said:
Lea, thanks 🙂
gemma said:
Those precious first smiles go around our hearts
readinpleasure said:
Forever! 🙂
Lucid Gypsy said:
An unforgettable moment!
readinpleasure said:
Etched in my memory. 🙂
artmusedog said:
What most mom’s and dad’s feel expressed so well ~ thanks,
Happy Weekend to you ~ ^_^
readinpleasure said:
Carol, thanks.
Nana Prah said:
That’s lovely.
readinpleasure said:
Thanks, Nana.
Parmis said:
Yes! How lovely re be reminded and the sentiment resonates with so deeply. Many blessings to you and your family and thanks for their lovely treat ❤
readinpleasure said:
My pleasure, Parmis. Hope you and yours are doing great. 🙂
silentlyheardonce said:
You only get 1 first. 😊
readinpleasure said:
Sure. 🙂
ANNE JEFFRIES said:
So true. That first smile. That first emotional connection.
readinpleasure said:
You nailed it. 🙂
Sumyanna said:
Gorgeous lines. I remember that time as well. Heart stolen!
readinpleasure said:
Indeed yes. Magic, really. 🙂
Al said:
That’s lovely Celestine
readinpleasure said:
Al, thanks. 🙂