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Rajani wants us to write a minute poem, 12 lines of 60 syllables broken into in 3 stanzas, following the 8/4/4/4 syllable pattern and the aabb/ ccdd/ eeff/ rhyme scheme.
will you be my lover tonight
siren of night
sing me to sleep
in your arms deep
like tranquil waters softly spill
over a hill
you are the breeze
I need to breathe
so be my lover one more time
when tides are high
and nights are dim
sing me to peace
(linked to Recuerda Mi Corazon.)
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So very sweet, Celestine.
Grateful to you, Sumana. 🙂
dear celestine, your heart is pure love! xo
Ow, thank you. It takes one such heart to know another. 🙂
Oh that’s so full of yearning and emotion.. wonderful Celestine. Thanks for sharing with Micropoetry Month!
My pleasure. 🙂
Cool.
Amoafowaa, thank you.
Anyone who can find someone to sing her or him to peace is blessed indeed!
Too blessed. 🙂
A new form for me but this is a delightful poem.
Thanks 🙂
Sing, sing me to peace… this all tugs at my heart. Beauty. Beauty in each and every word. So grateful for your poetic heart and friendship Celestine!
Lea, it’s a pleasure knowing such a lovely and generous soul like you. 🙂
Love the word creations and the last line especially ~ ‘sing me peace’ ~ can hear the ‘Spirit’ doing so ~ ^_^
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Thanking you for the comment, Carol. 🙂
Such a charming piece. Nicely done!
Thanks so much. 🙂