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Haiku Heights prompt. Late
Late (1)
his first date
staggers in late
drunk with love
Late (2)
his first pay
staggers home late
door is locked
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Beautiful set, Celestine. The second one is cute..haha..locked out? Ah, he deserved it, no?
He surely deserves it, my dear
{{applause}} 🙂
Thank you, Skye
Fun duo. Reminds me of the song that goes something like..I just got paid and now I want someone to spend it on.
LOL! There is lots of buzzing around on payday,
Love!! Haaa great take on the prompt
Thank you so much, Audra
loved the first one. drunk on love.
Thank you Kalpana
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Both of these are right to the heart of things. Good work.
Thank you, dear Alice
door is locked
this is the last time
learned too late
learned too late
that love can grow cold
on whiskey fumes
on whiskey fumes
the vines of love wither
and fruit never grows
fruit never grows
when the soil has been trampled
nature bows in shame
nature bows in shame
salt strewn on cold trampled ground
and in all the wounds
JzB
nature bows in shame
forever in acceptance
folly of humans
Haha any particular family member Celestine?
No one in particular, Gilly. But it is quite common to see lots of guys boozing on payday.
Fabulous take Celestine!! loved the one drunk in love 🙂
Glad you do, my friend
Lesson learned: Don’t be late! 😉
Ever! 🙂
Very witty and I like!
Thanks Marie. Hope you are doing well
Love them both, Celestine – the second brought out a chuckle 🙂
Chuckling too Eric. It does happen here 🙂
brilliant 😀
Thank you, Amrit 🙂
Late for love and late for pay. Habitual late comer! nicely expressed.
Thank you so much, ma’am
yup…sounds like a reality haiku. ☺ lock them doors!
He he he. A bitter lesson he won’t forget in a hurry!
serves him right, too! 😆
Hehehe!! That was hilarious!! Good one!!
Glad it made you laugh, Nanka
What a great take on the prompt! Very nicely done!
Thanks a million Susan. I appreciate your coming over
The second one is hilarious! Hopefully he got the message and it never happened again!!
You bet 🙂
first the martini
then she walked into my life
what was i drunk on
Cheers!
JzB
what was I drunk on
when my heart did a flip flop
chemistry at work
lovely weekend my friend!
first one splendid! second one serves him right!
It sure does serve him right!
That’s what I call wit ans sense of humour…happy writing…
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/red-sun-sinks.html
RS
hey, forgive typo for ‘and’..
Never mind 🙂
Thank you, Ramesh
Nice couplet! Lovely slices of life 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂
How did you get so much emotion into so few words? WOW! beebee
Oh Brenda, thanks so much. 🙂