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Done for Haiku Horizons. The prompt is Return
Return
cold shoulder
but he returns it
with a kiss
2
coffee smell
returns to haunt me
in my dreams
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu (10/3/14) I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
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Very nice sentiment Christine!
Thank you dear. 🙂
I should stop calling you Christine, Celestine! LOL
Never mind, they are Cs! 🙂
Lovely words! So beautiful! Much love sent to you dear!
Thank you so my friend! 🙂
such love, such sacrifice!
Oh Charles!
Love the first, RP! To compromise and be accommodating will enhance relationships. Wonderful write!
Hank
Thank you Hank.
Shalom 🙂
Peace and love, dear Nomzi. 🙂
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Love this! Thanks for following and sharing your comments with me.
Keep in touch! Am in love with your writing already xxx
Ow thanks so much Cheeni. Sure, will keep in touch 🙂
Great use of the word and so loving 🙂
Thankyou Aileen 🙂
Beautiful my sis!
I thank you dear sister. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
Extra sweet if the kiss is on the shoulder. 😉
(laughing) where else do you think the kiss will be Kim? 🙂
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Eloquent and on target! One of the many things I’ve always enjoyed about your haiku Celestine is that in addition to being beautifully scripted, they are always full of meaning. Making one take a few minutes to think about what you’ve just written! 🙂
Thanks for the lovely compliment,a Penny, as always! 🙂
I can’t say which of these two great poems I like better. Him. Or the coffee. Hmmm… 🙂
You can like both equally 🙂 But since I’m so crazy about the coffee I will go with that! 🙂
The guy sounded delicious, too. 🙂
love the first one ! feel the electric in the air !
with a kiss
says goodbye by the corpse
cold shoulder wears black
cold shoulder wears black
mourns love with sigh of relief
another man waits
another man waits
black suit with black limousine
parlour of spider
parlour of spider
I walk in quietly
wise as the ant
wise as the ant
in mourning dress
shares trapped flies
Ha ha ha! Hope you don’t get electrocuted. Thanks Milan 🙂
pl continue Celestine 🙂
a fragrance that haunts me, for reason unknown is the fragrance that comes off earth after the first rain.
I can understand. I also find that fragrance heady 🙂
Well enjoy the haunting… I loved the fragrance here..
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RS
Thanks Ramesh!
Ummmm….love this set, celestine. Coffee smell “haunts me” too! 🙂
Delightful haiku….!!
Thanks dear friend 🙂
Love the first one best. Hopefully the kisses will warm her up! ♥
Hopefully! 🙂 Thanks Kathy.
The kiss for a cold shoulder is an excellent return!
Thanks MMT!
Nice heat flowing from your words…and I enjoyed the banter between you and Milan.
Thanks Stella. Milan is a great haiku poet!
I love both of these! Maybe hot coffee would cure cold shoulder…
A perfect cure! 🙂
I love the aroma of coffee too 🙂 It always warms my heart. Hmmm cold shoulder from a loved one, now that would haunt me…
Yes, I can’t stand being cold shouldered. It makes me forlorn 🙂
Loved the reference to coffee smell 🙂
Thanks Amrit. I do love coffee!
Did he bring you the coffee? I would have expected it after the kiss 😉 Very nice Celestine.
Ha ha ha! I wish! 🙂 Thanks Cheryl 🙂
Loved the first one 🙂
Thanks Jolly
Those lingering moments can take us all aback.
Indeed yes, Marie 🙂
Oh the smell of coffee haiku is so good!
Thanks Wabi. I’m crazy about coffee!
Lovely set of haiku Celestine.
Thanks so much Kristjaan
My pleasure
Loved both..smell of coffee is intoxicating! 🙂
Indeed it is. I could go on and on about the heady aroma of coffee! 🙂
Beautiful.
Thank you Ese. 🙂