Tags
Carpe Diem, light, Nature, rays, Repetition, romance, Sun
Done for Carpe Diem.
bursting through the mist
silver rays kiss the leaves
ah, the dew, the dew
2
the light, oh the light
river shimmers at the rays
splendour of spring
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu 20/01/15 I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom
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I enjoy the way you repeat ideas. It gives me pause and captures my attention.
Actually when I read a repeated word or words in a poem it does the same to me. I pause and savour the words, reflecting on them. 🙂
Exactly. You are skilled poetess. 🙂
Lovely, keep them coming!
Thank you ma’am.
Nature awes you…
So nicely penned 🙂
Thanks Locomente.
You nailed this one. Brilliant.
Glad to hear that, 🙂
🙂
🙂 🙂
Got the vision of sitting by a quite flowing river. Very calming Celestine! 🙂
Thanks Stella.
You called me Stella Celestine? 🙂 🙂
Lol 🙂 Now what was I thinking of? Pardon me dear Sandra! 🙂
I pardon thee! 🙂 Hope you had a wonderful weekend. 🙂
I am completely enchanted by the light!
Sunrise to Sunrise
Ow, thanks Maggie. 🙂
Love how you captured the light in both of these!
Thank you 🙂
Oh I love the spring.. you gave me a great sensation there.
So glad, Bjorn. 🙂
Really beautiful
Hamish darling, thanks! 🙂
Celestine these are Beautiful, especially the first one. Vivid, melodic and effortlessly magnificent. Well done!
Parmis, most grateful for the lovely compliment. 🙂
I love the way you depict nature so romantically 🙂
Amrit, thanks. 🙂
Silver rays kiss the leaves…
These words bring smiles to my face. With the river shimmering at the rays, it reminds me of the power and beauty of nature.
Your comment is in itself a lovely appreciation of nature, Stella. 🙂
You surely know how to make beauty of nature also sensuous… Lovely!
Ese, thanks! 🙂
me likey!!!
Thank you Marie.
I like the light.. the light..
🙂 Thank you.
magical duo
Many thanks my friend.